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@hybridlore

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

Yep

@ellette-giselle

It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.

I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I ha…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]

@hybridlore

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.

@godlyfantasy12

Godlyyyy

You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.

@keilah-h

Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.

@ellette-giselle

Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!

I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@jonas

I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol

@hybridlore

<3

I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!

@esther-c

Aw girl you’re the best <3

@whalekeeper

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that  cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress

@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

@keilah-h

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

True, just his are completely red in the sclera

Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@jonas

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Thanks for asking!!!!

It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD

And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭

The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]