@cahndida-serkhaman
Active 10 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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BlueJay replied to the topic Greetings and salutations! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
Hello @his-instrument
Welcome to the bestistest place on earth. *Yay, I’m first. Sorry a bit of a competition to be the first to say that*
All I can write are short stories. Novels are too long for me. I’m not sure I have an hints other than read lots of short stories to get an idea on how to fit a long plot into few words. 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Greetings and salutations! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
Hello @his-instrument
Welcome to the bestist place on earth. *Yeah, I’m first. Sorry a bit of a competition to be the first to say that*
All I can write are short stories. Novels are too long for me. I’m not sure I have an hints other than read lots of short stories to get an idea on how to fit a long plot into few words. 🙂 -
BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 1 month ago
When King Darius signed the law that anyone who prayed
Be cast into the lions’ den, then Daniel undismayed,
Knelt down to pray three times each day, a window open wide,
Although some jealous men were watching him outside
They hurried to the palace court in wicked, spiteful glee,
Demanding that this favoured prince should pay the penalty.Then…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus Awesome!!! Congratulations! That is quite an accomplishment. 😀
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Greta replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 572 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 579 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus I’ll join you for a bit…say, until 2:30?
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Greta replied to the topic Plot & Characters— Inseparable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Yes, I agree with this so much. {Or, as @spradlin would say “gives many thumbs up.” 😉 } Great point about the smallest personality traits affecting the character’s decisions.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Plot & Characters— Inseparable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Agreed! Spot on, @kate-flournoy. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I’m back @daeus *waves eagerly* I didn’t get as much writing as I had wanted to, but I got some stuff down on paper. I’m unsure how many words as I was using a pen and I’m not about to count. 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic poetry writing together in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
This is AWESOME. You guys have done so much since I was gone. It’s looking great. *Stares into the distance and dreams of mango*
@daeus @faithdk @kate-flournoy -
Greta replied to the topic Please Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus, thanks so much for critiquing it! 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic Please Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for reading and critiquing it, @kate-flournoy! 🙂
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic poetry writing together in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
As I read through lots of forums,
A clear thought came to me.
Everyone on this here site
Is all good friends, you see.With talk of things like dragons,
And how Kate became one,
I laughed and cried and laughed again.
Boy, this place is fun!And now we all are writing
A special poem here
About how awesome this place is.
We’ll stay all through… -
Greta replied to the topic Please Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…
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Greta replied to the topic Please Critique! in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…
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Greta replied to the topic Knightings of the KeePers. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Hannah-c, Thank you! 😀 🙂 😉
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Greta replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy I know…it’s so depressing. I still can’t believe Cruz and Kasich dropped out. 🙁 I just have to remember that God’s got it under control. *sigh*
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Ingrid replied to the topic poetry writing together in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
Whoops…tag didn’t work. @bluejay
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Ingrid replied to the topic poetry writing together in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
Terrible isn’t the right word, @bluejay…any opportunity to learn, maybe. 😉 That’s a great idea!
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@bluejay! I love this!
Thank you @ingridrd. It was in a Bible Study book I did while I was schooling. Isn’t it a good reminder to pray??? 🙂
Absolutely! 🙂