BuildsByGideon

@joy-caroline

Awww, don’t mention it! I’m happy to know that my advice helped (and you’re totally not alone)! We’re all here to help each other out! 🙂

@abigail-m Aww!!!😊 Thank you so much, Abigail!!!!!!<333 That is so sweet of you to say!!!!❤️❤️❤️

@kathleenramm

Yikes… I’m sorry to hear you have the same problem! 🙁 Pacing is a mystery, that’s for sure 😀

Oh, I know, right? Character arcs in general are wonderful, but redemption arcs? Even better. I like them so much that I included it for one of my characters, Newton.

I’d have to say that my favorite character is either my MC, Caira…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Colin would probably just wear typical t-shirt and jeans.

Alright, I’m on it! 😀 You will have your drawing shortly! <3

@devastate-lasting

Thanks! The way that I write is that I can see what my characters do in my head, like a movie. I see them go through scenes, and then I write down what they say and do! 😀

@lewilliams

WHOA!!! I REALLY love that!! That is amazing!! I love the names you picked.

Seriously, I want to read more of that!!!! Just… yessssss!!!!

Heck, I used italics and caps lock, that’s how dang amazing it is!!!

CHAPTER I

BREN’S FEET BEAT SLOWLY DOWN ON THE HARD THER’EAN ROAD,

AND SHE COUGHED. The hot wind had blown dust into her face. She groaned. It was hot out, not a cloud in the sky, and she wanted to waste no breath. Already the last of her water she’d drank; her last piece of meat choked down an arid throat. She hadn’t been through a town for a…[Read more]

@lewilliams

Thanks! I worked pretty hard on it. 🙂

Well, heh, do you want me to tell you or to read it? XD

Heyyy, I love the name Bren!! 😀 That’s cool that you named your character Bren, too!

Thanks! I’ll put some more of the book in a next post. XD

I don’t know why the ending of that post turned out weird… it must’ve duplicated or glitched 😀

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Oh my gosh, thank you! 🙂 I’ll try my best at a description…

She’s around 14 (maybe 15) years old, first of all. She has pale skin and long, wavy blond hair that goes down her back. She normally has her hair down, but sometimes she braids it at the back (like a waterfall braid). Her eyes are dark grey. If you’re…[Read more]

Um, hey, everyone, this is totally random XD… but I wanted to upload a picture I drew of one of my MC’s. She’s going to get a collage (along with the 2 other MC’s)!

Hey, everyone! So… I’ll post some of my book, I guess.. just the prologue of book one XD.

Prologue

“I mean it. I’m never coming back,” she said angrily, throwing only necessary possessions into her satchel, grabbing her staff that lay nearby. “Bren, please don’t go. We need you here.” Her mother gazed at her with longing and despair.…

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@writerlexi1216

Sure! I can draw your MC if you want! 😀 <3

Oooh, this thread sounds amazing! I’d love to sketch out my MC, but unfortunately… let me just say that would be a bad idea XD If anybody’s looking for a project, I’d be happy to give a description of my MC! 🙂 (BTW, the drawings on here are fantabulous!!)

@gracie-j

Sure! Pirates are cool! XD

I’m up for anything, honestly.

@lewilliams

Aww, THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!! <33 🙂 YESS!!!!! Yeah, I’ve been feeling really bad for Keenum. I’ve totally tormented him a lot so far. XD :,( YAY!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!! (Aww, THANKS SOO MUCH!!!! That’s one of my favorite names in the story so far!! So, there’s this song by Ryan Stevenson called “Amadeo (Still My God)” and me…[Read more]

@abigail-m

I really love your art style!!! It looks so amazing!!! 😀

@mkfairygirl

Sure! I’d totally be willing to do that! <3