@bluejay
Active 6 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
here’s the first page of my WIP. thoughts?
Everyone knelt, the white fog weighing heavy around them. Jycin could feel his legs growing stiff in the cool damp air, but he dared not move. They would be coming at any moment and he didn’t have the luxury of playing with fate. He closed eyes and tried to distract himself with thoughts of…
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Hey! You working on Ignite? Also, is it the same doc as before that you have us beta reading? or am I just missing it?
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17, @rochellaine, @seekjustice (you’re probably asleep…I’m too lazy to look up what time it is for you though so just in case I shall tag you), @valtmy (same), @gracie-j, @dekreel, @catwing, @anyone-else
I’m writing! Anyone want to word war, chat musicals, chat plot, chat deaths, or chat about literally anything?
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Alia replied to the topic Too much? in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 6 months ago
@r-m-archer Thanks!
@gracie-j Thank you! Also my synopsis…
Jycin is a simple weaver in a simple village. Or at least he was. But when his sins lead to the choice of joining the hated priests or have his family killed, he discovers there is a much bigger world than he could have dreamed of. Faced with the future of losing his daughter, Jycin…
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Alia replied to the topic Spread the word in the forum Art 4 years, 6 months ago
I’ll do what I can!
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Or not. I have to get off now
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
I’ll be around for about 30 more minutes if I don’t get distracted by too much Tchaikovsky
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Alia replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@lewilliams, yours made me laugh
Somehow life wouldn’t be quite the same after all, even though no one would remember.
@anyone interested
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Alia started the topic Too much? in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 6 months ago
So I’m starting the second draft of my WIP and I’m wondering if the beginning is just over the top?
Everyone knelt, the white fog weighing heavy around them. Jycin could feel his legs growing stiff in the cool damp air, but he dared not move. They would be coming at any moment, and he didn’t have the luxury of playing with fate.Â
What do y’all…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17, maybe for another hour, then my day gets pretty busy
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine, @seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, @catwing, @dekreel, and anyone else
I am working on my 2nd draft if anyone wants to come chat for a bit
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
I meant I’m not writing
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
you still around? I’m writing right now but could chat for a bit
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Jackson Graham replied to the topic Uhh, Hi? in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 6 months ago
I LOVE making cultures. 🙂 My strategy is to mash up various characteristics of real-world cultures to make something unique. Although each culture has a specific aesthetic that I shoot for. For example, I might have a Medieval European aesthetic, but incorporate cultural elements/traditions from feudal Japan.
As a cold-blooded…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Nano-like writing site in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Yes, things are declining, but we don’t have to worry or fret because we can trust in God. 🙂
This also just shows the need for you, and Kingdom Pen, and Christians to get back involved in shaping the culture and our institutions.
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Nano-like writing site in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Maybe one day Kingdom Pen can create it’s own online software as an alternative to NaNoWriMo.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to sign off earlier than planned, but I might be back on later tonight, when some of our wonderful Australian friends can join as well
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Alia replied to the topic Poetry People in the forum Poetry 4 years, 7 months ago
I write poetry every now and then
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Alia replied to the topic A Question to Pick Your Minds in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
I often feel as though every character in a book is the same. They all think the same and act the same. This is most likely because it’s one person writing them all. So I really like it when I can tell that the author took time to give each and every character individual personalities and quirks. It takes a lot of research and…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
It was interesting. I got through 2.5 songs, partly I think its because the quality of the soundtrack on YouTube wasn’t that great. But the song where Jane and Bingley meet was a little bit cringe worthy. I definitely plan on giving it more of a chance at some point in the future.
Okay…do the things that the others said to do, but…[Read more]
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