@bluejay
Active 7 years, 9 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@Aislinn-Mollisong aha, I see. 😛 *belatedly revives you*
So, was there anything that confused you about the story? How well were you able to connect to the characters and their motivations? Was it difficult to piece together the backstory?
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Alia replied to the topic Names…again…I think I have a problem in the forum Characters 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ, thanks for the links, I gone to the fantasy one, but not the other one.
@princessfoo, flower names, yes. I’ll have to look into that.
@emily-d, ooh, cultures, I like that idea.
@seekjustice, I really like those.
@ingridrd, the idea of them starting with the same letter is honestly amazing because the names could have…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
Thanks @Dekreel!
@Daughteroftheking not a problem. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
Welcome to the site @introvert_girl! Glad you found us. I’m also likely a 4w5 (though sometimes I diagnose myself as a 1w2). What’s the premise of your current work-in-progress?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@Introvert_Girl heyyyyy! Another INFP! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet, fellow INFP! 😀 😀 I’m type 4 as well with wings 5 and 9. *grins* So pleased to have you here. What genre do you primarily write in? Do you like poetry?
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Guys, I just gotta say that this is going to be totally awesome once @dekreel writes this story!!! *claps hands* *jumps up and down in excitement*
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Ingrid replied to the topic I need a little bit of critique help! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon Just wanted to let you know that I read and critiqued your story this morning. Hopefully I wasn’t too harsh… 🙂
You did a fantastic job! Let me know if you have any questions about my critiques. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Jewelry Business Name in the forum Art 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon Ooooh, I like it! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Christmas Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Wow! Very nice. I like it overall but a few of the lines were a little wonky:
Also, I wasn’t quite sure if it was supposed to rhyme every other line…maybe you’d be better off not trying to rhyme…? Just some thoughts.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Hiya Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
*loooong sigh*Â How did I miss this?
Hello, @waterlily! Can’t wait to see you around the forum! Oh, and I have to ask since some of here are not human: are you a human, humoid, or creature?
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
I have an inkling you’ll like it here. 😉
Having writing friends has proven a big help to me in keeping on.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hiya Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@waterlily Oh; fun premise there! Hope your writing goes well with that story. 🙂
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ Oh; neat! I lived in Cranberry Township, which is about a half hour north of Pittsburgh, and currently live in Mount Airy, in the north-western part of North Carolina.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel Sounds good.
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Joy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper I am SO late, but this is awesome!! Ooh, can I be in the possible next story too? *Bambi eyes*
HAHAHA all those cliche jokes! I’m in stitches!
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Joy replied to the topic Favorite Book? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ *sighs* Wingfeather Saga! I know, I already commented about that in the START HERE forum but… well, ack the Wingfeather Saga is sooo good! lol
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Joy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy Ooh, awesome! I’ll read it this weekend at the very least. Thank you! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus, Want to cameo as the icecream-loving king again? 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@lady-iliara I have noticed that you don’t seem to be the only Keeper here who is from… what was that place called…? Aethasia! @aislinn-mollisong is from there, too, correct? Tell me about Aethasia. Who else lives there?
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