@beth-torres
Active 20 hours, 23 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 4 months ago
Aw, that’s rough! Praying he gets better!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Loops is right, they sound great! Nice sibling dynamic.
Ugh I just realized how many times I used “seemed” in this paragraph 🤦♀️
I only noticed it when you pointed it out XD
Sebastian
“To say he’s my ward, means that I keep an eye on him instead of his parents.” A fake laugh from young Angelo, which only Seb…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I love your characters so far! They seem really cute and funny.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hehe… whoops…
Buuuuuut it could change depending on how old he is, so picturing his hair in a different shade is fine 😂
You don’t need to rewrite it! It still fits, and they can stay in their dorm or leave, up to you.
Sorry, it’s short. Chase is just…difficult rn.
No prob.
Marcel
The new boy shook his head an…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hi!! Welcome! 😃 All we’re doing is shopping for a school dancesending charries to lunch
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@beth-torres I don’t think they do, but I think it was riding an elk on its own, so they must know it’s more intelligent than a normal cat.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @calyhuge @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @highscribeofaetherium @jonas
Snake
What’s thisssss? Small furry thingy?
The thing had noticed someone. The fire-breathing cat?
We need to—-AAAAGHHSHHSSSHH!!! FLAMES!
After that, it really screamed.
Snake screamed too, clutching his hand…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
That should be fine. Calyhuge just added one. We can pretend that they were already there before they left.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I didn’t notice any!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, sure! I’m not sure how much luck the other will have knocking Snake out, so that might be their only hope.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else
I drew Snake being attacked by the creature yesterday! It took me 3 hours lol. I just colored him today.

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RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @beth-torres @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @esther-c @hybridlore @smiley @trailblazer @whoever
@savannah_grace2009 posted our next prompt:
New Prompt: A person who keeps their emotions bottled up inside/won’t acknowledge their own pain to others.
Who would like to participate so we know? We don’t have a s…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I think it ran away after biting Snake, but idk exactly what its strategy is. Someone probably could go try to catch it. That would probably be a viable way to stop it, but otherwise, they can just beat up Snake until it stops.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@jonas Luckily the thing doesn’t know he has magic lol. Otherwise, this would get really bad really quick.
@savannah_grace2009 @calyhuge @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @highscribeofaetherium
Snake
One of them had his hand fly to his sword immediately.
“No, don’t do that!” Snake tried to shout, but his…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 oh no lol
@calyhuge @beth-torres @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium Ok, I’m ready for a rp!
Snake
He landed near the others, but far enough away he wouldn’t smell too much of those mouth-watering elk. He could hunt something else instead and slake his hunger that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@jonas @beth-torres i’m fine with that, but I’d have to RP for him at first and then the person controlling the mind control creature could take over. Hopefully i’ll get to that later today.
Oh, and if you have a sufficient amount of food, that could snap him out of it. Food makes his brain efficiency drop to 1%, and I think the creature would…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
We should have that happen to Snake if @keilah-h is fine with that. He would cause maximum chaos.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yes, a beeg ravine. With a river at the bottom. And beeg spiky jagged rocks.
@beth-torresYeah, that makes sense. That would indeed cause chaos.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @savannah_gracew2009 @trailblazer @beth-torres @acancello @calyhuge
I’m bored. What can we throw at our characters? A pack of wolves? Hungry Trolls? Ghosts? (I have no idea what creatures live in Lillen.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hmm… Strivings Within by Mitzi VanCleve is pretty good! The first half is more about the author’s personal experience with OCD, anxiety, and panic disorder, but the second half goes into a lot about how to handle it. Another one I’ve read is The OCD Healing Journey by Mark DeJesus, which is also good. It’s definitely more about how…[Read more]
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