@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium (I think I forgot to tag you for the first few chapters, sorry!)
Okay, here’s chapter 5.
Chapter 5: Names
The next seven months flew by in a blur.
Sef eagerly helped Neveah with whatever she asked of her, sweeping, washing the dishes, mopping the floor, and all with such vigor that surprised even…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
Falling, falling, falling. I try to cry out, as I grope the air for anything. Anything that will save me from my doom. No voice comes, only pain and breatg. No angel rescues me now, it is only me. Alone. Falling. I feel the blood trickling on my neck. The wicked laugh of my enemy sickens my heart. I close my eyes, accepting the fate of death,…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Since you guys liked the other Lilitu+Sef (AKA “LEFSE!”) scene I posted, I thought you might like this one as well!
As Sef walked with Lilitu, her side tingled.
He was so close to her.
Her heart beat wildly and her stomach turned inside out. She was happy, more than happy, because she was with Lilitu, and Lilitu made…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae oh sorry I forgot to tag you XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Livia
“Well, Xandro’s a good teacher, aren’t you?” she over enunciated each syllable, making sure Xandro got the point and wasn’t going to try any tricks. Xandro curled his lip and seemed to glare at Liv, and then turned his warm eyes back to Chase.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Chade Duke
If his hood had not hid Chase’s eyes from Livia, she would have seen a flash of crystal blue.
“S-sure, I haven’t ridden in a-ages.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Livia
She was glad to see that Chase liked Xandro. And Xandro seemed to like him as well. It wasn’t often that Xandro was able to bond with another person.
“Would you like to ride him?” she asked Chase. “I’m sure Xandro wouldn’t mind,” she eyed Xandro, warning him not to even try and object.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Chase scratched Xandro under his soft mane.
“I don’t think I’ve met you before. I’m Livia, but you can call me Liv. This is Xandro,” she patted Xandro’s neck. Chase played with Xandro’s lips, a strange light in his eyes, but it was hidden by his hood.
“Chase Duke.”
“Should we go to the mall now?” Livia slid down from Xandro…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ottoline
“I’m not sure how I can learn,” she bit her lip. “It will be really hard for me…and I’m not sure if you picked the right person to train, I’m pretty slow.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ah, ok.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
I really need to write more…
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The lament of every writer ever born.
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Yeah, me too. Hey, do you want to do a sprint together? I really need to just stop procrastinating, XD
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Umm…I can’t really sprint on my WIP right now…maybe tomorrow at about 2:30 CST? I could sprint tonight, but it would be brainstorming a short story…another one.
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I can’t sprint then, sorry 🙁 I’ll be busy with extracurricular activities all day and won’t have time till about this time tomorrow.
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Yeah, uafter about like seven at the latest, I can’t work on my WIP cuz the computer it’s saved on is the family one…I can only play with my pen and mobiscribe tablet.
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Oh, okay. You’re good! Maybe tomorrow?
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I won’t be on here for any real length of time tomorrow until after 2:30 CST, I have stable work! And a riding lesson I will not skip!
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@rae
Okay! Have fun!-
Thanks!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
That’s fine, just pretend Nahim didn’t ask.
When we put that last RP of Nahim’s in the docs, we need to remember to delete his question.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
“I’m from Laxor, fifth planet of the Realn tri-solar system. Orbited by the three moons, Naina, Xorain, and Rania. I’m from the Wond Galaxy. You?” A thick accent coated his voice as he spoke the names.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Is Carrie from a Sci-fi universe? And does she have experience in combat?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ottoline
She took a deep breath. “I want to learn, it’s just, I’m not sure how.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Livia
“Where did you learn to do that?” Callista gasped.
“I kind of taught myself,” Liv smiled shyly, now feeling awkward. She shouldn’t have been such a show off, she knew, but she couldn’t resist. “With Xandro, it’s easier, because he won’t let me fall off.” She noticed the boy petting Xandro. “If you scratch under his mane, like this,” she…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Nahim smiled again at Callie.
“I’ve never met a fire-breathing cat, but most people have never met fireproof salamanders either. The galaxies are a wide place, I never know what I’ll see next.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Chase Duke
Lydia* (or so Chase thought he had heard her called earlier) made a grand entrance on her blue horse. With Fynn and Lukas with Callista, he pulled his hood back over his head to hide his face from the new person as Callista asked Lydia a question. Stepping shyly towards the direction of the horse, for…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Nahim arched an eyebrow as Carrie looked down, acting as if she was embarrassed.
“His name is, um, Fire Face.” Nahim smiled at the little creature.
“What made you choose that name?”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannh_grace2009
We’ll try it 🙂
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Aww they’re so sweet!!!!!!!
Yeah, I really like Nahim and Nora as a couple.
I love the “pacing”, lol
My Nahim! He also plays the violin at random times. XD
Lol!