Beth

(Oh and I finally figured out how to keep the quotes from getting blurry when I downloaded them off the internet after I made Easton’s, so Hallie’s is probably clearer. XD)

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @rae @anyone-else-idk-XD

Pics are finally working!

M’kay, so I’ve already introduced these charries before, but at the time, pics weren’t working. Sooo… now it’s time to share their moodboards!!

@rae

Ooh, love the character… He sounds super cool…

I’m so gonna have to check out that video 👀

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, she did!! Probably my favs of hers ❤️ Although Tom, from the Wings of the Nightingale Trilogy, might be my fav…he reminded me of Riker a lot, hehe <3

I’m totally gonna have to read this now!

I have!!! ‘A Night Divided’ and I’ve been trying to read ‘Resistance’ by her!! She’s a great author too!!

Yes she is!! She keeps her s…[Read more]

Ignore the account name, it’s just the username I decided to use.

Play button in top right hand side of the page.

And to all who love Chase, I made this for him and I would like suggestions…

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @scoutfinch180 @whoever-else

Meet the friend-turned-traitor from my WIP!

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He dropped his gaze to the floor and didn’t speak for a moment. “I’m not offended… I just…” He sighed, tossing his bangs out of his eyes with a flip of his head. “I guess I am a little… self-centered, am I?” He gave a quick chuckle. “I just don’t want to… to lose her…” he softly said the last part, but pasted on a smile…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ru Eis

“Elves are common in the world I have just came from. Though, there is a world I know that they are only objects of fantasy.” Ru smiled again, fiddling nervously with her fingers. Despite her voice, there were signs upon her face that Ru was slightly shy. “Um, if you know, what’s the name of your home planet, Tech?”

(I’ve rewritten the beginning of my main WIP so many times. 🤣)

@savannah_grace2009

Okay! Yeah, I get that and I’ve been trying to work on that.

Awesome!

Okay so question-I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning. So should I change how I start the story? I’d still have the same scene where Neveah tells Sef that sh…

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@esther-c

Livia

She thought for a moment. “I think I remember that…is that why Chase left?”

“Yeah,” Fynn looked down at the floor.

“Well,” Liv began, “I’m not sure how to say this.”

“Oh,” Fynn said, the color draining from his face. “It’s that bad?”

Liv laughed. “No, I just don’t know how to say it…Okay, so if I know Callista, she’s…[Read more]

@esther-c

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had disappeared a while ago. I absolutely love how you described Sef missing him, but I do th…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

@savanah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled to cover how awkward his question had become. He fumbled with his bangs for a second, then put his hand back on Liv’s arm. “Well… there was one today…” He cast another glance Callie’s way and sighed. “She was trying to invite Chase to come to the dance and even invited him to come with us. I wasn’t exactl…[Read more]