@beth-torres
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 7 hours ago
RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!! I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
Wow, thanks.
I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.
Hopefully notifications work for you…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 9 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.
“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 days, 9 hours ago
I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.
Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.
Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.
The second sentence has a couple things.
Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 9 hours ago
It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!
WHAT IS THISSSS
IT’S EVEN MORE ACURRATE
AHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCHTHANK YOU SO MUCHHHH
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Lenny replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 9 hours ago
Lol, I noticed a typo tho…
They usually hang out in the open.
It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 10 hours ago
@theduckator
Idkkkk
Personally I don’t think it’s wrong to say it’s not a religion…
But we also have different denominations and my church has done sermons where my pastor has taught that Christianity is a “relationship, not a religion” so it could just be how I was raised. I respect your opinion and I’m not going to judge you or anything j…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 10 hours ago
HOW ARE THESE SO ACCURATE
you literally just described me…
It doesn’t have many friends
the magic potato just called me out….XDXD
ahhh i love it thank youuuuuu
*screams excitedly* I GOT A POTATOOOOOOOOOO
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
LOL! Who needs a braining brain when ya got a jumbled mess of chaos (If that makes any sense)? 😂 I know I have it.
EXACTLY
SOMEBODY GETS ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL. I lost a funny meme but it was so relatable. It had to do with not having touched any WIP since the cold winter of 1878… I think that’s me rn😂
That was me this fall. Idk wha…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 10 hours ago
YOU ARE A…
Hm, this potato is known to be a bit more secretive. It doesn’t have many friends, but the ones it is friends with are the VHP (very happy potato) and the cool potato. This potato is very active, and introverted. They love to read, and enjoys a nice warm drink, a good book, and the rain. They usually hang out…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
Honestly, when I write scenes I feel nothing.
Which makes me feel really bad, especially when other people tell me when they write hard scenes they cry a lot, and I’ve never really cried like that. The only time I can remember tearing up is when Sef was getting abused by Iver in a scene I wrote like last year…and it still hurts my…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
I showed that scene to one of my friends, and her exact words were:
“Livia and Marcurious have never been more annoying, and Aubrielle has never been more relatable”.
It was so funny lolll
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 10 hours ago
am I the only one who loves books yet still dog ears the pages??
like i’m so protective of my books yet dog eared pages don’t bother me….
I mean, maybe it’s because I love books so much that I’m too desperate to mark my page right away than go find a bookmark, idk…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 10 hours ago
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Lenny replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 4 days, 11 hours ago
KK,
YOU ARE A…
oh n0…
NO! The EVIL sister of the Kawaii Potato!!!!!! This potato is very pretty, she also gets lots of compliments, but she is EVIL!
She may look like a nice cute potato… but deep down, she likes causing CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She often does the evil act, as following: Explodes hot dog karts, kills off…[Read more]
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Lenny replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 11 hours ago
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Lenny replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 11 hours ago
Thanks! Also how was skiing?
No, I go to private. I exaggerated a little on the percent 😅😅 it was actually worth 15%… But for my German class it might as well have been 30%…
But I love the meme! That is really how my brain cells would do it!
Glad that there is nothing between us!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 12 hours ago
Sorry… I just wanted to use that meme template really badly!
It’s totally fine. I’m glad to see everyone enjoying themselves making memes about me lol
Also, I found the typo funny
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Lenny replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
Yay, I can’t wait to drop in and say hello! Even if it is for 0.000000000000000003 seconds!
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Lenny replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 22 hours ago
I feel that.
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Lenny replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 23 hours ago
LOL, my parents are almost never home so…
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