@beth-torres
Active 2 hours, 32 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
It was really good! I liked the scene a lot. I would really like to see the previous scene where the fight/killing happened. It would help straighten out the dialogue. You see, Misty thinks Tenz is wrong, Tenz thinks he;’s right. Roan, (who I don’t think saw much) is loyally siding with his sister. However, we don’t have the actua…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Whoops, didn’t know if you wanted me to post all that stuff yet. Oh well 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Awesome! Those are cute, are they from your WIP?
Noa Montero
Curly dark hair, tan skin, and brown eyes. Seventeen years old. Wearing a navy long-sleeved shirt tucked into black cargo pants and black lace-up boots.
Noa is the ship’s assistant pilot and the protagonist. She’s been traveling on the Annora for years and has been fly…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s awesome, congrats!
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Silvanis
Silvanis looked again. “About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.”
At Sniper’s visible confusion, Fairy motioned with her hands. “About this high and this wide.”
Not gonna say anythin’ exact since you have an idea, just know Dary rats are HUGE.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That reminds me, can you plz rp Sef soon?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
He’s in a random park rn with Sef somewhere in the city. If by the other two you mean Alpha and Violet, I guess so, maybe? Idk, @whalekeeper and I didn’t really set much of a place for them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
CONGRATS to @kyronthearcanin!!! She is now PUBLISHED!!!!!! 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉
@esther-c @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @rae @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @jonas @princesachronicles @thearcaneaxiom @trailblazer @everybody!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I have a way I can do a bully. She’s a shapeshifter, by the name of Narsa Jeptune. She’s actually an adult, but since she’s a shapeshifter, that doesn’t really matter. In Shyton, she’s a school teacher, but here we can say she was rejected for teaching, so came as a student named Judy Emerson instead. She’d join the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I have a Tenz scene!
@ellette-Giselle @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @whoever
It’s not that great, so don’t go in expecting much
Tenz brought his knees up to his chest, resting his cheeks on his patella’s, and wrapping his arms around his legs. His large, childish eyes looked from Roan resting on t…
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I propose they fight it, mainly cuz Silvanis would not run in a hundred years.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Silvanis
“Trevor’s right. There’s nothing better than getting into a fight.”
Fairy elbowed him in the side but Silvanis didn’t even wince.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
I might enter a charrie later, but not now
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
She wouldn’t want to join the gang probably because she’d see them as failures or something, but we could have a Wednesday personality (if you don’t understand, it was a tv show. I’ve only watched a review and a vid called “best Wednesday quotes” on youtube but she seems pretty funny…in a dark way) I just wouldn’t be able…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
This can be a new type of creature or a misshapen bear, you guys choose.
Silvanis
Silvanis stiffened at the sound of a twig snapping, but he thought at first that it was just one of the group being loud.
“Did anyone else hear that?”
The whisper arose Silvanis’s suspicions. Closing his eyes, he turned to look at the back of the group. A few…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Hey guys!! I just discovered this character creator online and I really like it! It’s pretty customizable and I’ve been able to make the avatars look a lot like my own characters. (And for you fantasy writers, you can choose unnatural skin or hair colors and add ears or horns. 😉 ) Just wanted to share the link if y’all want to check it out!
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, thanks!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
These characters sound so cool!! What’s the story about?
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yay, yay, yayyyy!!!! I’m so excited for you!!! 😆
Writing’s going pretty well! I’m nearing the end of the first draft to the novel I’ve been working on over the summer, but it’s not quite at the word count I want yet. I wanted it near 60k-70k, but it’s probably going to be 50k-55k once I finish it. 😬 The pacing is a little ro…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Silvanis
“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Color rushed to Silvanis’s face as he realized how quickly he had said that. He looked away as he saw her eyes on him.
Sorry that’s it’s so short, not sure exactly what else to write.
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