@beth-torres
Active 3 days, 15 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Sorry, I had to go for a while…I’ll be off and on a lot today, sorry.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 10 months ago
@I’m-not- sure- who- to-tag
So I actually plotted out my WIP, and I was wondering if anyone would want to look over it and see if anything is wrong with it.
I used Plot Points for my outline.
I’m just going to copy and paste it from my Google Docs, so hopefully it makes sense?
The Hook
-Sef’s mother gives birth to Hanna. They keep her a s…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
That’s exactly how Lilitu feels about Sef XD
He literally says that in another chapter:
“Wow, you’ve had quite the day,” Sef nodded, her eyes beginning to work their charm on Lilitu. Stop looking at me! He wanted to scream at her. Don’t you see that every time you look at me, I lose all my sanity? But he regained his composure and kept wa…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
Ottoline can swim, but not in freezing water.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Lolll
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m back.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
YES WE HAVEN’T HAD A MEME IN AGES WHAT’S WITH THAT?!?!? I guess we just haven’t had any moments that would make a particularly good meme lately.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Haha well I definitely think the RP would not be able to function properly without guys.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Be back guys, I’ve got to feed our bunnies, and brush my hair…it’s such a mess!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, okay.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
We should have some memes now…we’re overdo for some laughter…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, it just randomly goes down sometimes. It usually only lasts a day at the most.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yes, Lillening’s build ships, though they are fashion totally wood (totally possible) with not one metal nail. I have a couple ideas about design, but shall have to think it through some more…
Why do I feel like you, and me kinda own this RP now? You keep it going, and I give it lore.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I thought that was just for me! Okay, that’s good to know…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hola, peoples, I’m back!
Ah, wonderful, the Recent Topics page is down.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Hola, peoples, I’m back!
Ah, wonderful, the Recent Topics page is down.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
“What’s the price of a mile? Thousand of feet march to the beat, it’s an army on the march. long way. From home. Paying the price in young men’s lives. Thousands of feet march to the beat. It’s an army in despair. Knee-deep. In mud. Stuck in a trench with no way out.” – The Price of a Mile, by SABATON.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Just a random question, that came about while thinking about the swamp dragon…and then the ocean dragon…then everything else. It’s not that important to know… not like I’m going to try to drown all your charries in a swamp or anything…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Well, I mean, I believe in training for Marines (I could be wrong about which branch) you are supposed to be in freezing cold water for hours (to the point of sometimes hypothermia, at that point you’re pulled out and your body temp is gotten to normal. Then you have two choices, go back in or quit training) the idea being that if you have…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
I shall change that part! Thank you!
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