Beth

@esther-c

Sounds good!

Livia

“Sure!” Liv said, both to going to the mall and staying with Callista. “I guess I do need to find some new clothes, especially a dress for the dance. I didn’t bring a dress, only breeches,” she laughed and tickled Xandro’s chin.

@jomnas

Heroes, here we come!

@jonas

Yep. That works

@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision

Ami 

“Ooh, I like purple,” Ami said with a slow nod. “We should do a dark shade of purple. I think that would look really good.”

She had to admit, she was actually really excited for the dance. Sure, she was going with someone she had never expected to go with, but Clint was wonderful and she was looking forward…[Read more]

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Callista

“No, I just got here. Is there a place to go check in or something? I thought there would be more people around…where is everyone?”

Callista chuckled. “Um… I’m not sure if there’s a place to check in or not. But I have room in my dorm if you want to come stay with me. As for where everyone is… I’m not entirel…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m good with getting back to the heroes now.

@freedomwriter76

Yw!! 💖💖 Haha, sameeeeee XD (people on KP thought I was 17 or 18! 😆) My friends are all either older or younger. It’s funny, because the 2 friends I’m probably closest to…one is 5 years older than me and the other is 1 year younger than me 😂 And one is a girl and the other is a guy, sooo yeah XD

Same, my friends are amazing <3…

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@savannah_grace2009

Okay, here it is! I just used a placeholder for his faceclaim, so you’re welcome to change that! Let me know if you would prefer gray or any other changes 🙂

https://www.canva.com/design/DAF0KphuL9E/tggQHWXtFsUMrTvItYGnFw/edit?utm_content=DAF0KphuL9E&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, here it is! I just used a placeholder for his faceclaim, so you’re welcome to change that! Let me know if you would prefer gray or any other changes 🙂

@rae

Nice! I really like it!

I agree with what everyone else has said, especially that there were a lot of run-on sentences. But overall, it’s really great so far!

@rae

Those are both amazing! (Sorry I missed the one you posted a few days ago, I don’t have notifics activated so I’m likely to miss tags unless it’s something I check on often)

I love this line:

But the hero is the one who bleeds,

Red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.

Great job with both of them!

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, got it!

@hybridlore

Well it’s kind of a long story buuuut…….

While Sef is being abused, Lilitu gets visions of it, but he doesn’t know it’s her. Then he gets these urges from God to help her somehow, but he ignores them because he thinks it’s all in his head.

And then he finds out about her being abused and he feels really guilty because he feels…[Read more]

Vethe

“Fine!” Vethe snapped, “Go ahead! Survive!” She turned and dashed away again. “Goodbye, Dlek son of Razath.” She shouted over her shoulder as the turned the corner. A window sat in the wall at the end of the hallway. Perfect. She thought. She cast a glance back before launching herself out into thin air.

***

Dramatic exit 😎

@rae

I like it too! I did notice it was a little confusing like the others said, but it sounds like you’ve got that covered!

@savannah_grace2009

I like those scenes!

@rae

Nooo! 😭😭😭😭

@savannah_grace2009