@beth-torres
Active 1 week, 2 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, so, these spaceships you’re creating run on sound somehow, and you want help thinking of a different way to power them?
Basically XD. It was just a random idea that I had, and I wondered if there was any actual way sound could be used like that. But yeah, since there isn’t, I need to come up with a different way that they work or else j…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It doesn’t require sound to work in space at all, it just needs some way for starships to be powered.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Nahim
Nahim rolled his eyes.
“I can walk fine. Thank you for answering my question…finally.” He turned away, and walked up to Ellis, ignoring Kate’s presence.
“Is there anyway you can tell me exactly the weapons we need? Who does best with broadswords? Who need lighter weight or can handle a full sized sword. Daggers,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oops, my bad! I mean suggestions for other ways they could work. Yeah, that would require a lot of changes to this world XD
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I just did some research and found out that, XD. That does make sense, though. I’m just not sure how the mechanics are going to work behind the starfighters in a new idea I’m following, and that popped into my head. Do you have any suggestions?
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Ruth replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
(this is all by Realn reckoning)
So does the Wondian planet make a perfect 357 day rotation around it’s sun?
Wond makes an approximate rotation of 357 Earthling days, but I’ve not decided if it’s off that number by a day or just a couple hours. Notice my use of the word Earthling, for I haven’t even totally decided if a Wondian d…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I would think with enough debris and space junk, there would be enough matter for the sound waves to bounce off. Is that wrong?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
So, this might be a really dumb question . . .
There isn’t any sound in space because there isn’t anything for the sound waves to bounce off of–but in a world (think sort of similar to Skyward by Brandon Sanderson) where battles are fought from not far off the surface of planets to anywhere in deep space, is there any way sound…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
That’s fine, I think Sandro will somehow keep us going XD
Also, here is Chase’s base eye colors and their fitting emotion…
- Black – mistrust/unsure
- Green – normal/trust
- Yellow – warning
- White – pain/stress
- Blue – happiness
- Brown – uninterested or bored
- Purple – interest/curiosity
- Red -…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Guysssss
I don’t know how this happened….
In my WIP, there was this guy who broke into someone’s house and tried to kill him. They talked to the guy and found out his name. Well, they talk to him a couple of chapters later and they ask his name. At the moment, I couldn’t come up with anything so I put a placeholder for his name. And I literal…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I love this idea!! I’ll totally be joining in whenever I can! Definitely not this month, maybe next month, but I’ll definitely be able to do it more once the new year rolls around. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@everyone
Amir knows how to cook and he could probably take care of a few basic injuries, but he’s not a big fan of seeing blood and he’d probably get too nervous to take care of any big injuries. We’ll see. XD
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I would RP next, I’m just not exactly sure what to write. XD I’ll just wait until we make it to the mall. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Does anyone want to try Y-dubs/YWW with me??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ahh!! This looks so cool! I’ve heard of YWW before, but I didn’t know exactly what they offered. This actually may be really good for me. Especially since I can get a high school creative writing credit from one of their plans…. 👀 Anyway, I will definitely be thinking about this and I’ll let you know if I end up doing it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lollllllllllllll! That’s the best reply EVER!!!!!!!!!!
Nahim
Nahim looked at Carrie, unable to think.
“I’m not gong to pass out.” The red-haired lady behind him rolled her eyes and mumbled something to herself before turning back to her breakfast. “And I really don’t have time to rest, there’s just too much going on. And if you’ll…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Nahim
“I already got their opinion whether I wanted it or not. All they say is basically, ‘rest.’ I don’t have time to do that. Besides, you still haven’t told me your choice weapon.”
You did it, he should be resting! He said it himself!
Why am I so happy about this?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Once Derik gets in stride, there’s no stopping his humor. Until he goes too far. (I base him off myself in this respect.) Nothing to fear from him except bad dad jokes.
That sounds like my swim teacher! He’s really funny that way, lol!
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Happy Thanksgiving!!
How have you been?
Hi! Thanks for asking, that means a lot 🙂
I have been pretty good, since we moved and left our family in CA we had Thanksgiving by ourselves and got to make everything from scratch. We decorated for Christmas today to XD Have you decorated yet?
My WIP is also going petty good I am at 59,500 words now and I should be done this month with the…[Read more]
@acancello
If you don’t send me a copy of your book………AHHH! I NEED MORE HUGO SCENES! I LOVE HIM!!!!!!! BUT I KNOW VIKKI DIES SO IT WILL BE SOOO SAD BUT I DON’T CARE I STILL WANT TO READ EVERY SINGLE HUGO SCENE!!!!!!!!!
Lol!!!! I actually might not have Vikii die, Hugo seems to need her in his life. I honestly am thinking super hard about it though, my brother is all like “You better keep Vikii, Allison or I will give your book a one star review!” XD I know he really wont but the thought is hilarious. Ill try to post some scenes today…
oooh yessssssssssss! I actually think that Vikii dying might be a good character arc…unless of course it’s not necessary. Maybe she gets shot and ALMOST dies or something. that way they realize how important they are to each other. just a thought.
(btw, don’t be suprised if I gush over Hugo…I LOVE HIMMM!)
@acancello
forgot to tag you!
@acancello
Of course! It’s been a while since I talked to you!
Oh, cool! Was it weird without a lot of family there? We’ve always lived really far away from my grandparents and cousins, so I don’t think we’ve ever had family over for Thanksgiving. But my mom’s parents and her brother’s family are thinking about moving out here soon.…[Read more]
It’s currently at like 3k lol
@savannah_grace2009
Hi! How are you?
Hey! Thanks for asking! I’ve been good. I’ve been struggling to find motivation to write, and kind of doubting myself, so writing’s slow. But otherwise, I’m great! I WAS at 23K….but then I HAD to screw up everything, so I started over and am now at 15K. How are YOU?
@savannah_grace2009
Ugh, I’m sorry! Doubting yourself is the worst. 15k already? That’s really good! Why did you decide to start over?
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more]
@savannah_grace2009
Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well!
@savannah_grace2009
I think that is what I’m going to go with, her almost dying, and her realizing that she actually likes him. 🙂
@acancello
I can’t wait for that scene! It’s going to be sooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!
@hybridlore
It was a little weird without any family there since we have been doing it for my whole life, it was also really quiet and not as exciting. I mean, last year me and my cousins got in a car/golf cart crash. 😅 Long story, (no one was hurt!)
Thanks, I’m pretty surprised that I have been sticking with my WIP this long, lol!
I also…[Read more]
Oh goodness, a golf cart crash??? (that’s good no one was hurt!)
Yeah. My cousin whos 2-3 years younger than me was driving and I was in the passenger seat and all the others were in the back . She (not trying to be mean or anything) but she did not pay attention to anything around her. Her brother was chasing the cart trying to jump in and everyone was yelling at him to stop, she turned around, but kept her…[Read more]
@acancello
Oh no! That’s scary!
@acancello
Yikes! I’m glad no one was hurt, but that sounds scary!