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LivGiordano and Bella B. are now friends 6 years, 8 months ago
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LivGiordano and Lady Bella are now friends 6 years, 8 months ago
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LivGiordano replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@catwing Hmm. I could say a ton about this.
Like everyone else has said, yes, MKs are not all the same, stereotypes of either really good kids, or teens who don’t want to be there.
They can be just as normal as regular kids.
One thing I do notice, is that in general, it can be pretty hard to fit in. Living and knowing another culture very well,…[Read more]
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.
To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.
Maybe, you could…[Read more]
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine 😂 I would’ve thought that you already read it. But I wrote that vaguely just in case. Good thing I did. *coughs* Speed read like crazy so you can find out. Okay…and I didn’t spoil anything. Yet. Just gave you vague hints of something. 😏🤐And then let me know your reaction when you finish.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine I’m just leaving it at that. You’ll have to keep reading to find out. Let’s just say that he should take the nickname “Noble”. For this case, at least…
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @salome01w4g I love the Boy Colonel, as well as the other two. XD. I think Chester might be my favorite though. And Edmund. Wow. I think he deserves a high ranking. *cries* Especially that ending.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Ohh. @inkling-for-christ Those two are definitely on the list. Haha. There’s so many though.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Well, this is fun! *coughs* Some of the guys are in books not yet published from Ydubbers. Like someone named Ian. *coughs* Let’s just say he’s pretty awesome.
And from actually published books…
I would have to say Nat from the Witch of Blackbird Pond. Also Drew from the Wars of the Realm trilogy. Ooh, and I have one that’s more…[Read more]
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LivGiordano replied to the topic WE WON! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
We are close to Philly, so everyone around here is Eagles fans! And I’m so happy that they won!!! Especially at the end, when they gave glory to God. That was just way too awesome! *cheers*
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Questions about writing a short story in the forum Plotting 6 years, 9 months ago
@skredder That makes sense. It’s a snippet of the full-length arc. A teaser to the full-length story. Okay. *nods* That gives me a new perspective on this. Very helpful! Thank you.
@mariposa I really like the idea of doing the same kind of arc on a smaller level. It gives a hint of the overall story, but it’s not as huge or a really big…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic Hi fellow KaPeeFers!!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@the-real-kapeefer Ahhhh!!!! I am so late in welcoming you, but better late than never. Welcome! And now for the stalkerish questions. *drum roll please* What are your favorite and least favorite foods?
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Kylie replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@epicaddie2 @dekreel *falls off throne laughing* This is so funny, how do you do that?
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Kylie replied to the topic I don't know what I'm asking… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@warrioroftherealm Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!!! I finally get a chance to rant about my favorite books. I will try not to wrote a list a mile long. *takes deep breath to calm down* Ok, I’m good. You should definitely read Harry Potter, and then Percy Jackson, and then The squire tales by Gerald Morris are really good as well.
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Kylie replied to the topic First Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@skredder @valtmy @gh24682468999 These are all super great ideas, thank you all so much. Just one thing, @gh24682468999 What is Grammaly? I, in all my years of searching the internet, have never heard of it.
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LivGiordano started the topic Questions about writing a short story in the forum Plotting 6 years, 9 months ago
I’ve been desiring more and more to figure out how to write short stories, but it seems so…complicated.
So on someone’s blog, they are doing a short story contest. Here’s the link, if anyone’s interested:Â https://jesusisworthitall.weebly.com/for-writers/beauty-for-ashes-story-contest
And as soon as I saw the theme, I was like…wow. Because…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic First Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
P.s. So sorry for the weird indents and bad grammar if I missed a spot. Did not see that coming.
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Kylie started the topic First Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
Hi all! So, this is my first short story I’ve written, and I’m considering entering a contest with it, and I want it to be the best it can be. It probably isn’t very good, but, as mentioned previously, I want to make it better. Thank you guys so much! Here it is:
It was 1977. The disco party was in full swing. Lights were everywhere, and teens…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@amily-huddleston WELCOME TO THE BESTIEST PLACE ON THE INTERNET!!! (And yes @dekreel, I am going with the bandwagon) My humblest apologies for not welcoming you earlier. Allow me to introduce myself. *bows and trips over cape* I am Kylie, official member of the Harry Potter obsession club. To switch up the questions a bit, what are your favorite…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic You Know You're a Kapeefer When… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel You know your a Kapeefer when.. (and I am totally stealing @supermonkey42 idea because I literally check the website every day for this) a new Kingdom pen cinema video is out and you’ve watched at least all of them three times. (or maybe that’s just me :p )
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