Faith

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @keilah-h @whalekeeper @awsumfaith

Ok. So here’s my ideas for the rooms: (and I’m putting in your ideas as well)

Girls:

Ami, Eva, and Ara

Luna, Natasha, and Adelheide

Iris, Angeline, and Jocelyn

Thorn, Omega, and Beta

Hm… We have Naolin and I can’t remember if we have any other girl charrie…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Thanks!!! 😊😊

@starshiness

Lol, I’ve tried writing a few novels in the past without planning, so when I started my WIP, I was like: I need to at least plan something. XD (Which actually helped a ton when I plotted the story. 😁)

Thanks!!! 😊 I love them too, lol. 🥰

@awsumfaith

Of course! We’d love to have you join. We’re about to make the school a boarding school, so it’s like the perfect time to throw in new charries! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

No, we aren’t ethically Jewish. but I mean we haven’t done any genetic testing so…I guess it hasn’t been ruled out? XD

Yeah, we try our best every year to celebrate the appointed times in the Bible. =)

@awsumfaith

Uh…I don’t know much about geography…so I’m not sure how to help. However, you might consider renaming…[Read more]

@awsumfaith lolll nice! A lil bit of humor always helps a story out

@awsumfaith Ooooooooooops, so I somehow managed to miss your reply… from two pages ago…

Haha, glad to hear it! Ooo ok cool! I did read some of your earlier posts there and I love the feel of the Scavenger pirates. They sound like a great little bunch! I get the feeling that they might have some humorous moments.

Goshhhh two pirate writers,…[Read more]

@awsumfaith Ahh ok nice👌🏽

@awsumfaith Wooowww looks great! I’m afraid I know very little about maps (trying to make one for my own world is proving to be somewhat difficult 🤦🏽‍♀️) so I don’t have any advice to offer, but everything looks pretty cool to me! I do love the name Doran for your kingdom, it’s simple but sounds very… mm majestic? I’m curious about the…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Looks cool! I don’t think I can make any meaningful critiques or suggestions yet, because you’ve given very little. I would second Kathleen’s comment though, but you have full authority over how you name things. If it helps, I like making languages for my worlds, and come up with all my names from those.

@awsumfaith

No problem! (Trust me, geography is not usually my strong suit, but I decided to take the time to learn when I got into map-making. If you ever want to learn more about maps, WASD20 is a good youtuber who does fantasy maps. He does some DND stuff, but I just look at his mapping stuff in general. It was funny, actually, because when I…[Read more]

@awsumfaith @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @otherworldlyhistorian @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-I-missed-or-is-interested

It’s finally time for my MCs’ families!! 😄 Get ready everybody. It’s nine charries. XD

(Also, I put their name meanings, since I have that on the doc.)

Let’s start with the Nadirs!…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

I love it!!! 😃

The only thing I would suggest is with your rivers at the bottom of the map, or maybe just one, Grange, if I’m reading that right. Usually (unless this is unique to your world) no river goes from one ocean to another. That would make two continents, or a continent and an island. So because of that it seems that you…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Yo, this looks really cool! I have much respect to writers who create maps for their worlds, as its something I still aspire to do, haha.

If I had any suggestions it would to maybe make the names of each of the places on the map unique to your own world, history, and cultures.

Names like “Greenwood” and “Snowy Mountains” could be…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

No worries! Is it okay if I get back to you with the critiques tomorrow? We’re about to start Passover over here and I don’t have enough time to type out my response.

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith @anyone

Not gonna lie I have no idea how those tags didn’t work last time. 😕

Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:

Tali pressed a rough cloth to her temple, where Brycen had hit her. The gash had mostly stopped bleeding by now, but it still stung. Atticus paced the tent, and…[Read more]

@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin

Rampart

His eyes blinked open.

Darkness…… and not an Imperial facility.

The two glow-scales on his temples brightened to give him some more light.

The structure didn’t seem to be made by any dragon, in fact. Many of the…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin Thanks! The webbing on his hands is because he’s a sea dragon, so it helps him swim better.

@esther-c @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 Also there’s one detail I forgot about him. On the end of his tail, he tied a needle-sharp horn from a narwhal-like creature as a…[Read more]

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.

Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]

@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 All righty, that’s three votes for the “paranoid dragon”…..so let’s meet him! I won’t be able to RP as him yet, but I’ll try for tomorrow.

Name: Admiral Rampart (first name unknown)

Appearance and traits: A dark green and…[Read more]