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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔
“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD
@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢
Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Happy late birthday!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁
Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.
Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”
Lol.
He knew this room very well. Leon…
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I read through it and loved it! I think it will really touch the heart of whoever is going to read it. Don’t let the enemy convince you otherwise. If the Holy Spirit is calling you to do this, you can do it. He’ll give you the strength.
My favorites were Story #2, #3, #5, and #6. For order, I would suggest maybe putting the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Sara, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ll try to read through it and give some feedback if I have any. You’ve got this!! -
Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…
Sorry, I’m just confused lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Putting another character in here
Lois
“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.
“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Liko
“Mandatory?” Liko scratched his chin thoughtfully. “I doubt it. How can you have fun at a party you’re forced to go to? Though, I wouldn’t know for sure. I’m just the janitor.” He cringed inwardly, thinking about giant mess he’d have to help clean up in the ballroom later that night.
“Why? Scared to go?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae Aww Chase 🙁 The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@stephie
Oh yes, I’ll be praying! <3@theducktator
Yay!! Praise the Lord!!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@theducktator
Praying!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Yayy!!!! Praise God!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, that sounds about right. (It’s one of my favorite words 🤪). I’ll try to be mindful of it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay, yay! Does Ellette have your email?
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