Faith

*Happily stacks my 24 snowballs and enjoys a temporary retirement*

@ellette-giselle

Good section! And I like the boards. I’m interested to see what will happen now that they’re in the city again.

Two things:

The first thing that I noticed was… I forgot who William was. I thought he might be one of Amelia’s brothers 🫣, but I wasn’t sure. I think, with the amount of characters we have, especially the ones we’v…[Read more]

@loopylin

Glad to help! I’m so glad there’s gothic architecture (:

As a 6′ foot female, I’m tired of my height being celebrated. XD

Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology

@whalekeeper

I love all of these ideas thank you!

Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.

No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.

@mineralizedwritings

That’s amazing that she’s becoming more expressive. <3 So many older folks begin to lose that trait, as well as the ability to fully express out loud. Becoming old and forgetful can be a fear.

I applaud you writers who outline your short stories and manage to find a balance between too much and too little. It’s hard. *Applause*

Please give me a moment while I geek out over the potential of the ink magic system

– Ooh, what about robot catacombs? Like instead of the dead burial tunnels, have robot ‘burial’ catacombs underneath the city that can also function as an archive.

Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.

@loopylin

Hehe, I actually have ideas. That’s not normal.

I think it would be cool, during at least some of these mini-adventures, to focus on Lois and Fel because they start off having very different personalities and backgrounds. They kind of have to figure each other out…?

Here are some ideas:

– Every time I picture your story world, I…[Read more]

@theducktator That’s some good advice right there

Didn’t want to make a new topic, so this seemed like the most fitting place for this.

I’m a bit stuck with my story rn and I just need some filler or something. So does anyone have ideas for things my characters could do/trouble they could get into? It could be as ridiculous or mundane as you want, I don’t care. Any idea is a good idea right…[Read more]

@stephie

Very good practical points. I had a very similar discussion with my dad about two hours ago. 👍

@ellette-giselle

You probably still have enough company within that stance. (:

I mean for me it’s a very case-by-case thing. Like if a woman took an important mission with a bunch of men, knowing she’s the weak link, and potentially putting their lives at greater risk, then that’s wrong. Whereas if she’s the most capable in a scenario, yeah, I’m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka

That’s true, he could just graduate. It would be kiiiiind of hard to interact with a lot of other characters in the RP, unless you found some role for him in the school or really close by, since nearly everyone is a student. Since the concept of this roleplay is an alternate high school setting, we’ve rarely deviated from…[Read more]

When you’re trying to make every sentence count in a short story (me this afternoon):

@koshka

Aah, okay.

If you want, Leo can totally feel the need to move quicker, because Barnes is probably on the bus keeping an eye on them and I bet he would sense that. Because he’s Leo, of course. XD

 (Not that destructive behavior isn’t fun. We’ll just never get the the school dance at this rate. XD)

NEVERRRR 😛

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m glad to find someone who does agree. It’s a lonely stance

I don’t think anyone disagrees with you about a woman’s design. :] Unless you’re talking about whether they should fight or not