Faith

@theshadow @rae

Okay 😛

Barnes

Barnes turned on her heel and faced the sound – arms raised defensively. She made a point to stand in front of the nearest person without a weapon, who happened to be Emeline.

@ellette-giselle

You can borrow them back to post as long as you don’t kill them.

@ellette-giselle

HEY. There’s not enough room, okay? I like that quote.

Is that really a thing? Anyway, it’s too late. They’re mine now.

@ellette-giselle

Nope. Not happening. *puts all of your characters on the protection squad*

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, the special attention, and her age. 🤪

@theshadow

Hi Shadow (and everyone else, I haven’t been on for like a year at this point).

So when it comes to my personal faith, the answer I give would be similar to what other’s have already said here, that it was essentially that God gave Satan free will. If God only gave the capacity to do good, then what is the value of that? In my eyes,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhh, gotcha.

I don’t know. The way you described her. I think I’m just used to picking out love interests immediately.

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. How did Linus know about Amelia already? And you weren’t very subtle. XD

True, but they would have gotten married.

@ellette-giselle

I feel like Joseph and Amelia are going to get married . . . 🤭

@loopylin

I have some random prompts if that helps in tandem with Otherworldly’s advice.

– The villain is one of your protagonists, gone wrong.

– They have a design that completely contrasts the protagonist (if the protagonist is made of round organic shapes and colors, the villain is the opposite). Or maybe they have a similar design.

– Seems…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s so cute! I wonder what kind of adventure the little fox is on. I love the scenery and the cute cartoony style! 💕

@whalekeeper

oh I really like that idea. Two of my favorite things combined plus a little conflict <33

I would have to turn Lucky into some kind of alien, though.

@otherworldlyhistorian

Thanks! That is really helpful.

I guess in that case, I think my two main characters are actually antagonists to each other, maybe. They have opposite character arcs/ fatal flaws and kinda end up meeting in the middle at the end.

My other WIPs also need villains so I’ll probably be referencing this again.

Yay, okay! @keilah-h @theducktator are you guys interested in running into our group? We can either make it peaceful or go for a surprise fight, I’m game for whatever. XD

@theshadow

As if on cue, the walls around them began to rumble, the floor shook, and a loud hiss sounded behind the group.

I’m curious to find out what this is, lol.

@ellette-giselle

I figured you probably knew, but just wanted go make sure. Because otherwise I would start rambling about stuff without defining things, like I normally do. XD

Yeah, I either lump it into personality or give it a category

@ellette-giselle

That’s true, the rewrite was.

The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!! A happy part this time!! 🥲

@loopylin

Ooh, have you considered a space circus troupe? If you’re figuring out where to put her, that is. Seems like something one of your main characters (like one of the twins) could run away to in a fit of anger, and have some time to think.

@highscribeofaetherium

I like how you stylized the trees, very cute!