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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.
I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@loopylin now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway.
Nearly empty. Ugh, I hate that I can’t edit typos after a certain time limit.
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Loopy replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
People must be hungry or something
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I have one other character wandering about. Could she join the Foreign Literature class whenever that happens?
Yeah she can join! Currently there’s just a few characters in the classroom chatting until the lesson starts.
Liko
“Well, you have the whole day ahead of you to make new friends. And with baking this good, I doubt it will…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae I can’t remember if Felicity and Chase ever had a conversation before
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Felicity
Felicity strolled down the hall towards her first class of the day, late but not running. She paused as a middle school aged boy trudged past her, buried deep in his dark hoodie.
“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway. “Rain storm incoming.”
She smiled at the boy, brow creasing in the slig…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Why is everyone’s reaction to these little potatoes’ existence violence? Lol
Also, I am very honored to receive the couch potato award 😌
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper wants to read this too probably
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I love it! Anie’s accent is so much fun to read. And Riven is such an interesting but evil character
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Organizing My Drafts in the forum Plotting 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey gang! Sooo I need some help and idk what to do );
I really struggle with finishing drafts, or at least I did, and now it’s caused me future problems. Because of this, I have past unfinished “drafts” but its mostly a lot of the same scenes written over and over. But, it’s really good writing, and a lot of it pinpoints different things id…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
@theshadow
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh cool! Have you ever played a game? How does designing a character work? (If you’ve done that)
Well, that’s more experience than me. XD
Oh, and did that pudding ever thicken?
NOOO it DIDN’T
The flavor is still good, though. :p
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
I would appreciate it if you guys could pray for me! My OCD’s been worse lately, and I’ve been feeling depressed some days. Just pray for healing for my OCD and that God would help me lean on Him and grow closer to Him.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yay! It looks good! 😊 Looking forward to the next one!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol
November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Does anyone have experience playing DnD? We talked about it on the meet-up call today, and I’ve done a bit of research.
(I know this probably isn’t the best place to ask, but I’m also interested to see if most people avoid the game, or whatever.)
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Aw, I’m sorry to hear that, I’ll be praying for you.
Thanks man 🙂
It is the morning of the dance. The party will start in the evening so there’s still plenty of time.
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Enid replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
I think it would depend on how traumatized Alan’s instincts are. It makes sense for somebody in panic to fly off into risky situations, but if he has the sense to think about how he’s going to travel and hide, then he might have to put some thought into where he is going.
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