Faith

@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty

Telling y’all this now so I won’t procrastinate this week, lol.

I’m going to edit the paragraph and then repost it by Friday, taking into account your suggestions.

@keilah-h

Oh yeahhh! That’d be perfect! 😂

@keilah-h

Haha, true though. 😂

The guys I know can do the accent pretty well though, just cuz they’re so accustomed to it🤪

@keilah-h

Lolll 😂😂

The Aussies I know are actually redheads…

(Bro… I wonder if Andrew is stalking our conversation, seeing as he’s an Aussie 🤭)

@theshadow

It looks so much better! I love that we got to see their family now. I feel like I know the characters so much better already.

@keilah-h

what is it about them that we Americans find so fascinating??

I have no idea 😂 I guess Americans just have a boring flat accent so we like to hear something different 🤣

@liberty

I feel bad saying this because a couple others have said the same thing, but I can’t submit a story this time. 😭😭 School and other responsibilities took priority over writing these past couple of weeks and I wasn’t able to get much done. 😣 I’m so sorry!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I love that soo much!! That was always so sad to me. I didn’t know C. S. Lewis told everyone what happened to her afterward!

You should totally write it!!

@theducktator

Alright, here’s my silly alien guy:

Liko is about 7 feet tall, has blue skin, fluffy green hair, and has 4 arms. He is about college age, but he works as the school’s janitor/ handy man. He also has his pet slime monster thing, Dusty, who’s just following him around right now and helping him hold tools.

Liko

While screwing in a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Yess another school rp meme to add to my collection hehe

@rae

Dante

Dante stared at the knife for a long moment, not responding. It stabbed through his coat sleeve, pinning it to the door. Once his heartbeat slowed back down, he let out a deep breath and pulled out the knife.

“Nah, just nicked me,” he said, casually handing it back to Alpha.

He then took off his coat, showing the shallow cut on his…[Read more]

@theshadow

I would love to see it!

@theducktator

Lol. Everything looks better with an ellipse.

I’ll watch that. 

@linus-smallprint

I will answer your audience questions in a few days when I have time. :]

@the_lost-journal @hybridlore

I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

You’re not the only ones. My Lovedream project is sci-fi fantasy mixed with horror, or something like that.

@theshadow

I’m following along! And I’ll answer any group questions you post; for now, I’ll stay quiet. *Ninja reads*

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! I approved it.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Y’all were talking about British and Australian exclamations and it reminded me of something that happened recently…

So we have friends who are Australian, but their dad is the only one who actually naturally has the accent. I’m a sucker for the Aussie accent, lol. And I was talking with him one time and with some…[Read more]

Also, one thing I just thought of; we don’t really care about the characters’ families since we haven’t met them yet. Maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen the first chapter by showing Jack and Elina getting home and seeing their parents and siblings.

@theshadow

This chapter does a good job building up the suspense! The only thing I would say is yeah, Ellette has a point. These girls seem to be so mean for no real reason that I can guess at yet. It makes them feel flatter, rather than like actual people who have motives and stuff for their actions. Their ultimate goal, especially in a…[Read more]