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Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Happy Fourth!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
So does everyone else at the base know… you know.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I love Michael. His explanation was believable and so sweet. 😢
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 24
Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.
How can anything go b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I want to rant about theremins. >:3
A theremin is an electric instrument invented accidentally in the 1920s. It is played without any physical contact by the performer. Two antennas create electromagnetic fields, and the performer waves their hand around the antennas to manipulate pitch and volume.
Finding a theremin is hard because there…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m reawakening this topic because I’m putting together a list of magic system questions for myself. (Felt like updating my world bible.) They will be posted here when I’m done!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))
I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh no. Praying!!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.
Should I write Farewell in first person?
Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.
I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
How’s the editing going so far? I bet you’re super tired by now. XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Summer 2025 Project: The Ashen Star (Working Title) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I’ll try to check it out! It sounds cool, but I don’t know if I’m ready to sign up for reading another project right now. I’m sure there are some people on here who would, though!
Throwing out some tags…
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I still feel like Jonathan’s brother might not be dead, but I know you tried to quench that.
Jonathan was pretty smart, and the Agents wanted him before, so they might try to get him to work for them. Or something. Maybe use Michael as leverage. Or they want them to help them defeat the rebels by taking information… 🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
They should be on there, but it might take a minute. Sometimes I have to reload mine for it to work.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @whalekeeper @theshadow
New chapters!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
What are you doing to them?!
No, this is actually really interesting… I wonder what the Agents want with them. Probably nothing good.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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