Faith

@elishavet-pidyon Wait now I’m really curious what the original rp was

@ellette-giselle

Lol.

I’m very curious to see what the rest of the book is like.

@ellette-Giselle

Hah! so there was a time jump!

Called it 😉

So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.

Okay!

@loopylin

1. Thank you Madam Lin the Loopy-Minded, I shall always welcome your feedback.

2. Very good. Take the time you need.

3. Good. >:)

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

I’ll throw him in with the boys after I sort things out, read up to this point. I’m leaving for the doctor’s and my mind is occupied with needles.

@jonas It worked!

Finally decided what story to do and filled out the form 👍

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.

@whalekeeper If you do want to write for Hugo, he could be Felicity’s lab partner if you want, or maybe there’s an odd number of people in the class and so the teacher has all three boys work together or something

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭

Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…

First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.

Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

@whalekeeper

1. As always, I absolutely love reading your writing. Thanks for sharing <3

2. There will be more Fel and Lo scenes eventually. I’m currently struggling with coming up with a villain and filling out the main plot.

3. Your current signature is diabolical and not appreciated.

@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Lois

Lois slipped the note into his pocket and looked around the classroom. Most of his classmates faces were unfamiliar. He didn’t have much energy at the moment to introduce himself to someone new, and pairing up with Felicity was an almost guaranteed bad grade.

Viktor shifted uneasily in his seat next to Lois.…[Read more]

@koshka

*Does a little dance* Descriptions are sometimes the bane of my existence because you never know if they’re coming across.

And I promise bullying isn’t the majority of Lucille’s childhood experience. There are actually so many things I want to write about for her, and many things are more cheerful and interesting.

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

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@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Two new chapters!