Ava Coulter

@nanisnook @lydia-s @joelle-stone @issawriter7 @nova21 @faith-q @relia

I’m going to be writing again for a bit if anyone wants to join me. 🙂

@daisy-torres Thank you!!!!! 🙂

@daisy-torres Awesome job!!!!!! Ooh, I love that snippet!!!!!! 😀

I wrote 270 words. Last line:

But before I realized what was going on, a ball of fire sped past me, crashed into the ice tower I had just created, and melted it in a heartbeat.

Thank you so much for sprinting with me!!!!!! 😀

@scripter-of-kingdoms I’m sorry I missed your sprint yesterday. I hope your writing went great though!!! 🙂 <33

@daisy-torres I’ll join your sprint!!!! 😀 And YAY that’s exciting!!!!!! 😀

@faith-q Of course! I’m glad I was able to help 🙂

@gracie-j Haha no worries! And yes! I learn a lot from movies, so a lot of my tips have to do with watching them (also it’s fun to dive back into old favorite films…)

@faith-q Thanks for tagging me and so sorry I missed your sprint! I’m glad you finished your chapter!

@faith-q

Of course:) Thank you also!:D

@faith-q

Hi Faith! I’d love to join (I need some accountability for a project too:)

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, I totally feel this struggle. It does get more difficult to handle characters transitioning to a new world when there is more than one of them, as well. It isn’t impossible, it just gets more challenging.

It sounds like the characters are waking up to a day where there may not be much else to do aside from introduce them t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Wow! I loved this poem, you did such a great job with it. I was also surprised to hear that you don’t write poetry–this is really good!

Now, this is coming from an amateur in poetry, so disregard my comments if they don’t apply:

I noticed that there is no exclamation point in the second “Evil queen! Evil queen!” section here (I…[Read more]

@daisy-torres,

It’s The Pen Inspired.

Aw, shoot! *glares at technology*

I finished the post and am going to take a break, then go back and edit it ’cause I can already tell it’s pretty trashy. XD Not sure how many words I got.

@daisy-torres,

Working on a blog post, so sure! Starting at :28.

@scripter-of-kingdoms,

Thanks for the tag! Sorry I didn’t make it – how did you do?

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!

YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).

Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]

@faith-q That sounds like an interesting character! JC and Issabelle have already said most of what I was going to say, so here are a couple little tips I have for you (and @gracie-j too!):

I suggest you take a look at the stories you mentioned and watch/read them with a notebook on hand, writing down what stands out to you the most about the…[Read more]

Also, @gracie-j I just HAD to say that I LOVE your tagline. It’s pure gold, sis. XD and I can honestly relate waaAAAAAaaay too much XD

@faith-q

Wow, this is a tough one. I honestly get the struggle, I’m not entirely sure if I’ll have any helpful advice, but here’s just some thoughts.

The first thing I recommend is just to read everything and anything you can find that is a story told from a child’s pov. Especially ones with girls around your character’s age and maybe try to…[Read more]