Ava Blue

@loopylin

Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD

I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?

Ideas ideas

– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit

– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]

@jonas

Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.

Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.

Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]

Also….

Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?

@ellette-giselle

What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.

Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..

Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….

They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.

Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*

@koshka

That type of randomness must be preserved.

I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.

It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

At parties, I hang out with the younger kids and have a lot of fun with them, but after church most of the younger kids are racing around on rolling chairs, even though we’ve been specifically told not to.😅

@ellette-giselle

our family of 6 is the smallest family in the church. the average is about nine kids

Wow. My family has 6 kids, and there is one church where we go when we’re on vacation in which we’re average, but usually we’re the weird ones.

 honestly think that it’s not good to have that big of a congregation. We’re called to fellowship with…

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@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested

The next chapter is up!

In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey

Chapter 6

“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.

In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]

@stephie

*screeches* I’ll get you for this! After I write a bunch of words…*sobs*

I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

It turned out nicely!

@the_lost-journal

*screams*

@the_lost-journal

*gasp* It must be contagious!

@rae

Magick (I’m specifically spelling it with a ‘k’ because the ‘k’ on the end is connected to the occult, and I want it to be clear that this is bad magic)

Wow, I didn’t know that. I just spelled my dark magick with a k because it looks more evil. XD

@the_lost-journal

Magic, sir. Magic. XD

@stephie

Dance is the only reason I know how to apply makeup. XD