Ava Blue

@rae

Yes, and after all the entries are posted, we elect 1-3 judges who aren’t doing a story, and they decide upon a winner.

Okay! I plan on doing the music one.

Help.

@everyone

Today is the start day!

@loopylin

I’ve known about it, but I should probably actually do it this year

Lol, yeah.

@linus-smallprint

Good idea! James 1:1-14 works for me!

@linus-smallprint

First, your reviews are excellent. I’m impressed with your thoroughness.

I would rate it 4 stars. I loved it, though the swearing did get on my nerves. It would be 5 stars if there wasn’t so much swearing. I thought the MC, (it’s been a while since I’ve read it, and I don’t remember his name), and Sefawynn were adorable…[Read more]

@rae

Lol my bad, I’m not correcting you! I’m saying a character can have an aura of seriousness and be hiding something, like you said, but they can also be completely honest if the author wants to go in that route. It’s really up to the person.

This might be more of a side thread, but it also helps to know how aware the character is of their own seriousness, and how aware they allow others to be when that seriousness pops up.

For example, the chewing-lip-denial @rae just mentioned suggests the character doesn’t know they are expressive in the first place, or it suggests the character…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I see you with the new Aragorn pfp XD

@loopylin

XD thank you! I’ve been trying really hard to make the dialogue realistic so I’m glad to hear you say that!

@whalekeeper

Thank you! XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks! <3<3

Not being active isn’t something to apologize for girl!! I don’t want you to be a internet addict lol

@koshka

oh I forgot he also has pointy ears. This would be so much easier with pictures.

Liko

“Yep. All mine.” Liko grinned. He was propping himself up with one arm and using two others to undo the tape. With the spare, he tried to wipe some mud off his cheek, but only ended up smearing it.

“I’m talan. I’m assuming you’re human, right? Sorr…[Read more]

Oh that also reminds me, Ed needs a date.

I honestly forgot about her lol

Oof that reminds me, Marcel needs a tux 😅

@rae

hehe

Violet

The girl stepped back, still reserved. “Violet. Robotics engineer and programmer. Here on a temporary scholarship trip.”

It sounds ridiculous, but this group of characters are named Rose, Violet and Daisy 🤣🤣 Creative ingenuity right there. Y’all should take notes.

@rae

Fyi she belongs to a mystery story. So she and the rest of her cast are very thorough when it comes to evidence/justice/whatever. ;]

Violet

“It means bringing you to justice for being irresponsible.” Violet raised an eyebrow, and held up the robot. “And I have the evidence to prove you guilty.”

Gage twisted its head around with a mel…[Read more]

@rae

Aw, I like little robot companions! They’re always so cute.

I redesigned her but forgot Gage existed for a while 😂 Originally he was a knockoff of Wall-e, which I won’t hold against my six-year-old self. Wall-e is an amazing movie.

Violet

Violet cocked her head. “And at how many inconvenient times have you scratched that itch?”

When the g…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.

I can believe it

@koshka

Liko

“Well, that’s definitely a, uh, creative approach.” Liko squinted at the mess of duck tape. “Do you mind if I…?”

After a bit of shuffling, the man gave him enough room to reach the pipe. Liko then carefully began pee…[Read more]

@rae

Coolsies 😛

Violet

“Gage, record.”

The robot’s eyes spun, clicking, and gazed sightlessly at the surrounding lawnscape.

“The experiment was a positive until power failed.” Violet bowed her head, hair falling over her chest. “We’ll try tomorrow. But at least, for now, we can get some key lime pie or something. Forgo any further advan…[Read more]

@esther-c @loopylin

Same thing here! I’ve been told to play sports and I’ve made… interesting attempts XD You may have been grumpy, Loops, but I’ve always been the player who was too busy watching a butterfly to notice an incoming ball.

And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.

@koshka @loopylin

*Watches…[Read more]

@theducktator oh same page summer, right? I’ve known about it, but I should probably actually do it this year 😅 Thanks for the link!