Ava Blue

And it feels like I’m going in circles. XD

If “you’re unloveable” is a side of her ‘shard of glass’, then maybe “your hopeless,” “you’re alone,” “your too far gone,” etc.

@savannah_grace2009

Wow. That’s dark. Pretty good story-wise, though. I’ll just go on a rabbit trail of plotting and hope it gives ideas. XD

I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s…[Read more]

Ok! I read it. It’s good. They seem very inexperienced/in over their heads, but they’re handling it with humor so it’s funny. XD

Although the wolves were scary. O.O XD

@ellette-giselle

Ok. I am in the middle of section 2. I’ll go back and finish it. I’m just so… amazed.

WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That? XD I’m sorry, it’s just something I remember from a visiting missionary. You rarely if ever start off saying “the gods are false.” Telling people everything they believe is a lie will typically…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo, lies. XD if I remember right, they want to start with little lies (because they’re more believable) and then work toward bigger lies with more power. So here are some ideas for chains of lies.

“You should be able to be strong enough on your own” (so when you falter, “you must be a failure” can follow)

“If God loved you,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t started it yet, but I will later this week. Maybe tomorrow, since I’m probably too sick for co-op.

What if today you woke up with only the things you thanked God for yesterday?

@freed_and_redeemed ^^ messed up your tag again

Aggghhhh stupid old tag

@freedomwriter76 @anyone I found a song that I think that people on here would like, but I couldn’t think of anything specific except Freedom.

Anyway, here it is! https://open.spotify.com/track/7sbHjSkhPbrZbHq8zJo8us?si=1aWpksOmQ9OXITk5AKMwQQ

Under the Starlight by Remedy Drive

It’s a Christian rock band :]

Memorable quotes from church camp:

“Ah! Glitter! Burn it with fire!”

“Where the flip did that shirt spawn from?”

“It’s the Rizzy Rogan Hat!”

“But Rogan doesn’t have rizz!”

@the_lost-journal @theshadow @stephie  I figure only Catholics will get this. XD

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper (Do you like sugar or cream with that?)

Thank ya’ll so much! I am enjoying using a simpler, more whimsical style than I use with graphite. Watercolor is just… fairytale-esc.

And shading with watercolor is finally starting to make sense. XD

@mineralizedwritings

Miiinnnn, hey girl!! Has life been chill with you?

 I realized afterwards this was just the author being really smart. The match wasn’t super important, and by the main character having it explained to him we get it summarized as readers.

I shall remember this in case of emergency boring scene, then. XD Sometimes you just go…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooooh tasty art. *Nom nom nom* And watercolors are the perfect medium for such a character! Job very well done, I must say!!

*Bored because I’m stuck in bed* *Scrolls KP*

@elishavet-pidyon

Ooh pretty, and I like the name Letice. It’s very unique.

@koshka

11 pm is late? Gracious, I must be an insomniac or something. I’m doing good to be down by 12. Now my usual get up time is between 7:00 – 8:00 depending on the day, so I suppose if you’re an early riser it makes…

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@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @ifyouknowAlwin @anyone

Ok… You know that one character? The one who is disturbingly realistic? If I make a thread sometime later this month about handling dark topics in a God glorifying way, this is why.

Meet Letice, Alwin’s mother. I love her, but I heard her story years ago and…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hi, I don’t believe I’ve talked to you in what feels like ages 😂

I wish I could be of advice but uh I haven’t touched my draft in months?? Ikr???

I did at some point stop writing scenes I wasn’t interested in and that kinda helped. Like idk, I watch some anime that just skips the boring stuff. A great example of this is I was…[Read more]