Ava Blue

@linus-smallprint

I will answer your audience questions in a few days when I have time. :]

@the_lost-journal @hybridlore

I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

You’re not the only ones. My Lovedream project is sci-fi fantasy mixed with horror, or something like that.

@theshadow

I’m following along! And I’ll answer any group questions you post; for now, I’ll stay quiet. *Ninja reads*

@hybridlore

One thing I’ve noticed is that you tend to use a lot of ellipses.

@theshadow

“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

Ducks???👀

@loopylin

Sure! They’re in the entrance right now.

Vyette

Vyette glared up at the school. A boarding school! How could her father do this to her? “It’s an experience,” he’d said. An experience? Maybe for the working class. She shoved another bag at her maid, who was already carrying four. “Come on. Don’t take all day.” She stalked into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I recommend a portfolio page, a contact form, and an ‘About Me’ page.

Sounds good! *takes note*

I might take you up on the help if stuff gets complicated.

(Though I should really make one for myself first.)

Lol. Yeah, that might be a good idea. Sounds like me trying to teach kids how to build a prayer life. Or sew.

Ah. Well if…

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@mineralizedwritings

Oof, yeah technology can be it’s own personality sometimes. XD I will definitely look into the Lide and those programs.

Good to know! I guess any form of social interaction depends on the group. You want to connect on several levels, not just art form or values separately. I’m so thankful for KP. ❤️

@anyone This is long, sorry

Liko

At 6:00 am, while the school halls were still mostly quiet and empty, Liko arrived at work, holding a bucket in one hand. The contents of the bucket sloshed and jiggled at his side as he made his way to the supply closet. After setting the bucket down, he unlocked the closet door.

First thing’s first: clean the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ducktator, did you see that note I added on the idea of using a slave to push Alan in the direction of trusting and obeying The Saviour? What are your thoughts on that?

I’m not sure. I see how it would help your story, and it’s an interesting perspective to take. My main concern would be people thinking you support slavery. I…[Read more]

@jonas

My favorites are Chromancy, Spectrachromy, and Prismaturgy. I think Chromamancy has too many syllables.

Also I’m really intrigued by the idea of a color based magic system, if that’s what this is. It sounds cool.

@theducktator

If you want, I have a character in the school that you can have your characters meet. I haven’t written anything for him yet but I will in a bit.

Dante

“Banned for life! Ya got that? Show your face around here again and I’m calling the cops!”

Dante Tucker found himself being forcefully thrown out of a shop at seven in the morning and into the street. A poorly trimmed bush by the sidewalk broke his fall.

“… One-eyed freak.”

The front door slammed behind him.

Dante picked himself u…[Read more]

@jonas

My favorite is Chromancy.

@to-whom-it-may-concern

If it’s okay, I’d like to add some characters. They’re all from the same WIP, but they don’t know each other.

Vyette

She’s an earth elemental. She is fairly tall, at 5′ 9”, and has medium brown skin, green eyes, and black braids streaked with green. Her father is the (rich) vice president, and she is an arrogant snob…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I have succumbed. It took me long enough to find them, but it is done.

I had too much fun with this. XD

@linus-smallprint

As a reader, is this a direction you would be satisfied to see the story take?

Yes

What do you think of the character development you see in this (specifically for Alan, Martha, Eric, and Cyrus)?

Seems solid.

Now that you’ve seen some more, what are your thoughts on the similarities between Eric and Kalmar?

I think it’s d…[Read more]