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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m glad you like them! yeah… what happens to Layson… You might never find out XD As the plot gets more finished I want to have less and less of it out on the internet, in case I get published.
I believe it was already said, I didn’t emphasize it a lot though. Just some foreshadowing.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Yup! I’m pretty proud of that plot twist XD
Yeah, on one post the italicizing wasn’t working, so you had to pay extra attention to the flow to separate the narration from the thoughts.
Good question! I haven’t put much thought into it because I have quite a few mc’s, so I might never get around to developing that. Owen is not a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, 0k! Are y0y homeschooled? That’s pretty cool to get to do that for a senoir project!
Here’s some random ideas:
- Maybe there spaceship connects to something underground, and if so, piosonious gas from underground is a concern?
- What jobs do the other aliens have? Maybe there freelance wok is considered a low job, or kinda savage ect. making…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin
Do you care if I ask you about your comic making process? I’m trying to see how other people do that to get ideas on possible ways of doing for myself. -
TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey Landri! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m theloonyone
I also babysit and play the piano, but I’m not very good at cooking and I’m a tea girl 🤣😁 Like everyone else here, I’m a writer (I’m currently heavily editing my novel), but I also love music, art, and nerding out on books and movies.
Anyway, newbie questions!
1. What kind of…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I finished my rough draft… anyone interested? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @microphage6032
Sorry it’s taken me so long to post this… I’m a procrastinator 😐
Anyway, here’s chapter one:
One
The woman that sat across from him was the definition of perfection. Her stunning eyes glinted and brought out her beautiful hair. With unnatural grace, she reached forward to grab her glass and…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin
Ah, I’ve only met guys that have that name. I used have that problem with GodlyFantasy’s November, I’d only met girls with the name November. I’ll get used to Eddie eventually XDI think Power’s idea about holographic chair would be hilarious. I could totally imagine Dante trying to sell it to them and then they try it out XD and the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I don’t know what rooms there are and who’s all in them, so I’m just gonna make one up and hope it exists. XD
We all do that. XD If you make it, it exists. The castle has no map or boundaries.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@katthewriter
XD that time when you try to refer to your characters as a traumatized something-or-other and then you realize they’re all traumatized.@esther-c @loopylin @princesachronicle22
Okay, then.
I’m gonna stick the gang in. *mischievous plotting*Uh, I guess here’s character descriptions, for context/fun?
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Loopy replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@princessachronicle22
I have a setting, backstory, and characters. I just need to figure out a plot for the comic. It’s fine if you don’t have any ideas, though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12
Dante
“Well then, you’re neither enemy nor ally of mine….yet. What are your names?” Allen said.
Dante glanced at Corvina. Her strange shadows began to drift around her again, and she looked like she was trying to slip away. Dante grinned and looked back at Allen.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Carter
The group of old and new friends got along well. They laughed and talked to each other as they walked, sharing stories from their previous adventures in the castle.
The group hesitated when they encountered the end of the hall. There were two doors leading to the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Aw, thanks! Actually, it’s neither my character or my art. It’s a character from a book series called Lockwood & Co., that I am reading right now and absolutely love. I wouldn’t recommend it for sensitive readers… There are ghosts, murder mysteries and a fair amount of scary, bloody situations. But the main characters (the…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
You’re not intruding! The CC is for anyone : )
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Loopy replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
yes I’d love to read it!
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Loopy replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
I went this whole time thinking Eddie was a guy… Whoops.
lol, nah, you’re fine. I have a
badhabit of naming characters names that are technically for both genders, but are usually used for one or the other. For example, I have a boy character named Lois. He gets teased for it a lot by his friend. -
Loopy replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, yes! More ideas always please!
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My Senior Project! (help me) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin
OOOOOO Let me know when you’re finished with it, I’d love to see it! =D
*is very embarrassed* I went this whole time thinking Eddie was a guy… Whoops.
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