Ava Blue

@WHALEKEEPER

MEEEE

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s good to know, thanks! Even then though, I sometimes feel like I might come off a little pretentious when I’m either sharing or critiquing.

I get that! Sometimes it’s hard to feel how much to share, imo if somebody asks for help, you can go all out on whatever they asked for help with. I’m a little cautious, so unless it’…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

XDXD glad the suspense is getting you lol! That might have actually been the last one lol 😂

@keilah-h

Elliot

“That one’s … Elissa, I believe,” the man told him, pointing to the woman with the bland style. “And call me Crosshair. If you ever forget it, just take a look at this.” He pointed at a cross tattooed over his eye. Well, Elliot thought, Maybe he has the same dramatic flair that I do. Crosshair spoke again, “Where did you c…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

it’s fine! I think people were just confused because we do have a forum just for critiques, where most of that happens. People are pretty open to any advice here though, we all want to get better and others incite is always useful!

@freedomwriter76

OOOOOOO YES! *excitement*

Hmmmm

I like Riker because he’s relatable, he struggles with similar thoughts and feelings that either I am struggling with, have struggled with in the past, or seen other people struggle with. Also because he tries to do the right thing, regardless of what’s going on around him.

@freedomwriter76

That was EPIC! 😆😆😆

Thanks! I’m glad it was Eddie meeting Frida and not Ellie.

Eddie 

Eddie let a hot breath out her nose as she watched Frida and Felix disappear behind the corner.

“Well, thanks, Eddie…they’re gone now.” Steffi said with a smile.

Jason laughed. “Thank goodness.”

Eddie gave a start, suddenly realizing that…[Read more]

OOOOOO the sUsPenSe *joins you in the rubbing of hands*

*eagerly awaits the next snippet, if you choose to share another one*

@freedomwriter76

Well that was my first time writing any kind of a fight scene ever 🤣 feels good making your character look cool XD

@loopylin

Yw! I was hoping I’d get to go first because I had so many ideas for it lol

@mineralizedwritings Thanks for rping first! I kinda panicked last night after I asked about the monster because I realized I had no idea what it should be.😅@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

Ellie and Dante

The group walked out onto a large balcony covered in plants. It seemed like it had once been a well-kept garden, but now it was overgrown to…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks lol! I love writing him so much. He’s like mature enough to make proper decisions but immature enough to smirk every now and then over something petty XD

@freedomwriter76

LEO!! 😭😭😭😍

@freedomwriter76

He’s 6’2″

XDXD I looked up how tall tony stark is and it said 6’1″ and I was like OHHH Tauren’s going to be so petty about that if he gets the chance lol

@esther-c

And if you don’t feel like it np 😉

I just wanted to remind you it existed XD

@freedomwriter76

Oh yeah! I love to see what you wrote of Leo!

@freedomwriter76

yep! Too many reasons 😍😍😍😍

Rueban’s still my fav though. XD

@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Tauren and lesli

“I’m tired.”

“Yeah, I know.” Tauren pushes lesli off of his shoulder. “We’re at a dinner table. At least try to keep your eyes open please.”

They look up as the door flings open. A tall man enters the room, wearing something strange on his hand. His hand glows blue.

“Are all of y…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, thanks!!!! 💕💕💕💕💕

Yw! <3<33

Ahh, IKR!? He’s just so precious!!!! 😍😍😍😍

So precious!! XDXD

If you don’t mind me asking, what is it exactly that you love about Riker??? Just kinda curious to see WHY everyone loves him…🤭’

Hmmm… lets see…

1. He has a cute name lol
2. He’s really relatable!
3. He needs a hug 😭
4. I get his strug…

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@felicity

Thanks! Yeah, the shopping district is one of my favorite things to write.