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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Craft Your Next Story week-long writing challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
XD You got around to doing this for I did, congratulations! I’ll be attending this. =p
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I can’t tell you how much your writing has improved since I first roleplayed with you, like girl! You should be so proud!! <3 Love the descriptions of Asher trying to keep the smoke at bay!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’ve got time now!
@lightoverdarkness6 If you have the time to rp, we’re ramping up the one with Tony Tauren Lesli Mathew and the other two rn.
Tauren hesitantly walks over to (insert bad guys name I can’t remember XD!). (insert bad guys name) looks up, glaring stiffly at Tony.
“Can we uh– get that key?” Tauren says, crossing…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
OOOOO this is a very interesting discussion!
I agree that positive parents are desperately needed in fiction. I also agree that positive parents doesn’t mean flawless parents.
I have some positive parental relationships and potientally (I haven’t decided yet) some toxic parental relationships. I would think if you were going to…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank you so much for making this! XD
I have a couple instances of bad parents in my story, but also some good ones.
I’ve noticed the exact same thing in books for ya these days. It’s pretty tempting to go that way because it’s really hard to give characters actually moral flaws, because we love them and want them to be perfect!…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
What would ya’ll think of the title, “Afterthoughts of a broken heart”? for my second book? It’s almost a little bit cringe but it sounds much better than afterthoughts of a releaseor.
@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 (If you’re not back yet that’s fine! 🙂 take your time!)
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi!! To all the writers out there who are graduating this year, congrats!
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Loopy replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Not losing any friendship here. I love people who want to talk about important things like this and who aren’t afraid say what they think is true. Please keep reading your dialogues and bringing up great topics to discuss.
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Don’t stop, conversations like this are fun!
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Enid replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
I need to stop doing this, I am going to lose some friends
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Enid replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
This isn’t something you have to apologize for, kay? <3 I am not the high and mighty word of wisdom. This is just something I wanted to talk about, and foster consideration. And your charries’ role models sound great!
@everyoneingeneral
I read all your posts, and thank you for spamming me, I enjoyed it, and am glad that people…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
You might find it interesting that npr did an article on why teens are drawn to dystopia novels. You can find it here:…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@starshiness I’m pretty sure you are right. One interesting thing is that there is no overarching rating board for books like there is for movies or video games. Instead books are placed into the sections that they are by publishers, libraries, and bookstores. When trying to decide where to place a book (either the children’s, you…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago
Aw, thanks!!
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Loopy replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
I totally agree! There’s nothing wrong with writing the occasional bad or deceased parent of course, but it seems like every book I read (and even more so with tv shows) has a bunch of characters with parent issues.
Have you read the article on here called “Navigating Family Stereotypes”? It talks about this a bit and has some reall…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Ahhhhh nice parents!!!!!
I’ve noticed this too, and it is a little disturbing. It’s not that we shouldn’t address abuse etc. in our writing – we should – but we need to be careful about what we portray as normal. The words we write are powerful.
Also, that note on character flaws is Soo true and pretty much a personal writing…[Read more]
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Enid started the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Okay, so I’ve been wanting to do this for a long time:
This is the thread where we talk about our charries’ parents!!! Specifically, those that are alive, kicking, and actually nice to their children.
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Okay, okay, hear me out, here’s where I’m coming from. I think we have too many parents that are just dead or abusive.
I’m not targeting…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @keilah-h
If you guys don’t mind, I’m on pause for like, an entire week 😅 I might touch here in Monday – dunno – I’ll try – there’s like, end-of-year school drama, graduations, old friends, all that amazing stuff.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
I’m behind on the reading, just finished chapter 5So…Dune looks like a cat??? XD I went the entire first four chapters thinking he was a bird. *facepalm*
AAaand now I’ve finished chapter six.
Okay, I love this group. They’re hilarious, this is going to be fun.
I’m tired and so don’t have any suggestions for you, I’m sorry. - Load More

I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)
I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
<3
XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!