Ava Blue

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, and be sure to show how the people are being negatively affected through actions, not just dialogue. Give examples, in some of the charries’ lives, of why the people feel this way.

@dekreel

Lol she’s a little bit like my oc Kaine! He acts super aggressive sometimes because he doesn’t trust anyone due to previous encounters with bad people.

@esther-c

No probs, you’ll do great!!

@godlyfantasy12

Oki-dokie I love trying to help with these XD

The first question that comes to mind, is, why are the people resentful of the royal family? Why are they low-key rebelling?

There should be a clear, important reason – that requires action.

I can see the whole ‘royalty’s just a symbol’ being…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Ok, I kinda get where you’re going with this! Music videos is something that sounds like fun to me. I’m not committing to anything as of right now because I would need a more solid view of the direction it was going to go.

I gotta say I think this idea seems much better suited for instagram. I am a bit biased because it’s…[Read more]

@felicity

Hey girl! Saw you were online, how’s life?

@lightoverdarkness6

XDXD thanks! Glad you like Layson lol

@freedomwriter76

i mean…i think every writer does 🤣 i understand XD but ahhh, i love that!!!! Layson and Everly…that scene…just…❤️❤️❤️ EVERSON FOREVA!!!!! 😍😍😍 (and yes, i just came up with that ship name 🤣)

XDXD so glad you like them!

AHHHHHHH, I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍

 

hahaha, poor Hurricane Hair 😂

 

i love this so much &#x1f60…

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@janellebelovedpig

This sounds really cool! I’m into video production too, but currently limited to short reels on instagram. I probably won’t join just because it isn’t something I feel called to do, but I will be praying about it. Just curious, what kind of videos are you planning on making? I do have a interest in short films, but that’s kinda…[Read more]

@esther-c

@freedomwriter76

I think a general rule of thumb for charecter deaths can be some up in that your character death should cause you (as the author) to be legitimately sad (or at least make you feel in some way) and not just be like well I checked if a box yay. On a topic of if you just want to find a way to add urgency and lack of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

@freedomwriter76

LOl I have the best idea for this XDXD

Everson, oh I haven’t though of that yet! So cute!

Ok question though, Tesli or Lauren? I’ve been having a hard time deciding.

@freedomwriter76

Yep lol I know how that goes. I don’t have a lot of stuff outside of the house, but this recent quarter I was kinda not ready for the workload of my astronomy class, and got pretty overwhelmed. It’s weird because it’s nice to not be bored… but definitely tiring lol.

Welllll I do like making my charries suffer… Maybe I won’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Is it a good kinda busy, or the not so fun type lol? Just like school and chickens?

Writing is going well! I mean writing in my head….

XDXD

I thought about Kaine and Everly a lot last night (I go to bed early and get up late sometimes but lets be honest I’m not even trying to sleep for most of that time lol, too many ideas…[Read more]

@loopylin

XD

I never listening to secular music growing up, so I just discovered them.

You aswell!

@freedomwriter76

Lol your profile pic is ever changing. Some Bucky fanart from the internet this time I assume?

@lightoverdarkness6

Sorry to hear that girl! <3

@freedomwriter76

Thanks for asking!

Well not amazing lol. I woke up at like 3 am because of some health problems, ended up throwing up and other stuff so yeah. Wasn’t nearly as bad as some other times, not sure why. I did look out my window and see two deer trotting through the dark in the rain,…[Read more]

@loopylin

Not sure if this will at all help, but here’s my approach to titles.

I think titles are always more interesting if they do not connect to what the characters are doing, but to the inner conflicts, themes, and messages of the book, origins, or a struggle. Idk, I like abstract titles that make you think. So I’d focus on what the emotions…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’d say, first off the bat, that killing off a character doesn’t automatically make a book better. If you are going to kill off someone, it’s important to have a specific reason – to highlight the power of the villain, finish an arc, make a thematic point – instead of doing it just because you feel like it’ll make things better. I would…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 LOL LOVE IT!!

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Lesli stands back in shock, looking down at Acheron, then at Luna.

“Luna?” Lesli echoes Tauren.

Tauren slowly picks up Acheron’s sword.

Not much heavier than my pickaxe.

He steps back, still watching him warily.

“THAT WAS EPIC!” Lesli exclaims. She raises Luna’s hand in…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Calvin

Calvin nodded, with a slow, comforting smile. “Totally fine. I guess I get pretty scary when I’ve been up for forty-eight hours straight.”

Then, to Wolfgang – “Sorry about Marcel, too. He won’t apologize when he’s grumpy.”