Ava Blue

Oh, and the two brothers inheritance conflict came from history. Goodness, was it roman history? I was watching some video with my dad about it lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

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Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@theducktator

I’ll try to be of help!

I write post-dystopia. Like after such government fails and the world has been in dilapidated disorder for a long time. It’s kinda similar lol

It sounds like you’re concerned it isn’t believable. What I would say is use history as your guide. There are evil governments, like Hitler’s dictatorship, but there…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok ok XD sure thing

Actually can you tag the lotr readers here? I don’t know who they are lol

I recently finished Lotr and did this Chibi of Farimir.

@ellette-giselle

Ditto on the comment about gesture, the movement and composition is great in that drawing.

@free_and_redeemed @princesachronicle

Thanks guys XD

@rae

Poor Nahim. Imagine being a tomato…ugh.😂 I don’t like tomatoes. What do you usually eat for breakfast?

@savannah_grace2009

Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!

Sister: “What’s a cheese monger?”

Me: “It’s like a haberdasher, but with cheese instead of hats.”

@keilah-h

You’re welcome!

oop I see I already thanked you. sorry. XD

Lol.

@highscribeofaetherium

Ouch. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.

@highscribeofaetherium

 Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.

How do you know this?😂

I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.

Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.

@ellette-giselle

I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.

@savannah_grace2009

Wait, Cass is leading her on? Why would he do that?

Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period.

I think it’s a pretty sucky age gap but I guess that’s beside the point. Does this world have a time period tied to it? Sef was looking at a photograph at one point and it made me curious.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, she definitely needs a stuffed toad. Named Bartholomew, or Lollihops, or Snugglepie, or Melchizedek. And maybe some chocolate.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no. I liked you, Cassian! Don’t hurt Sef, she’s gone through a lot. (And will go through more, since she’s the main character.) Lilitu, go buy your girl a comfort stuffie. Maybe a toad?