Ava Blue

@linus-smallprint

I’m going to try and look at all of this when possible.

@esther-c

The only place I rant about my characters or my writing is really on here or any other writing community.

I do tend to share a lot of mine with my siblings, but other than them, and here, no one gets to know about it.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the extra ideas. I bet I can make a list of things to focus on with line thickness.

Nice drawing!! I always like how dedicated you are with the textures, such as the wood and brick floor. that takes more patience than I have at this time.
I agree with Keilah on both those points. Another thing – Alan’s left arm might…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This is sooo good! Your writing is so beautiful.

I never show my parents anything other than funny short stories. I don’t think they’d dislike it or not approve…but having parents read my cringey emotional or romantic scenes…*shudders*

I want to use was and were less. I’ve noticed this mostly in my essays. I’ll write sentences like he was, or this was, and in my last essay I eliminated a lot of those, and it sounded a lot better.

I want to get better at worldbuilding. That’s something that always gets neglected in my stories. I generally just make stuff up as I go along, but…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I love it sooo much!!! They’re so cute!

Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!

@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22

Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.

@grcr

I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)

@grcr

Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP

Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.

@elishavet-pidyon

*is in bliss*

XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.

The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.

Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]

@grcr

AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!

That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3

I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.

So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3

@highscribeofaetherium

This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.

@whalekeeper

*sees clean gesture drawing*

*is in bliss*

I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…

I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.

Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?

@savannah_grace2009

This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

Same. XD

@the_lost-journal

Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…

Sorry, I’m just confused lol

@savannah_grace2009

DO IT! THIS IS SO COOL!

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Putting another character in here

Lois

“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.

“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]

@theducktator

Liko 

“Mandatory?” Liko scratched his chin thoughtfully. “I doubt it. How can you have fun at a party you’re forced to go to? Though, I wouldn’t know for sure. I’m just the janitor.” He cringed inwardly, thinking about giant mess he’d have to help clean up in the ballroom later that night.

“Why? Scared to go?”

@rae Aww Chase 🙁  The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.