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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
It’s barely working on my end. @godlyfantasy12 I’m sorry for responding an hour late because that’s how long it took to get in.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
First time I’ve ever had to rewrite an rp. Stupid glitches.
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka
Ellie
For a long moment, Ellie stood still, staring at the teacher as her classmates talked and played behind her. Eventually, the teacher turned her expressionless mask towards Ellie. Her tail twitched. Then something connected in her brain and she…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I love her.
Thanks XD I felt like we needed at least one secretly kind adult on this rp.
I hope the problems straighten out soon. I saw Reagan Ramm visited last week.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
My internet connection with this website is abhorrent. It took ten minutes to just load into the main page. Wyoh, if thou watchest over me, go haunt someone else.
Barnes
“Hey, Miss Teacher?” One of the smallest girls asked. “Why did we leave the classroom?”
Barnes, meanwhile, was setting up her file cabinet under a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Anyone else having a problem with KP taking like a full minute to load each new page you try to open? I also keep encountering random error codes and times when KP just refuses to open for a couple hours.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Felicity
Felicity looked at Chase with a new kind of admiration. He wasn’t as fearsome as she had pictured after the fight the previous night. Instead he seemed kind and gentle, more so than most other people she had met.
Just then, a little girl walked past in the hallway with something black trailing behind her like an extra bouncy…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@koshka @whalekeeper @raxforge
Ellie
Slowly, the students all formed a single file line and followed the teacher outside. Ellie followed close behind her sister, and Syph followed close behind her.
As she walked, Ellie held her backpack in both arms in front of her, trying to minimize the jostling and hoping that it wouldn’t wake Blackjack.…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Barnes
When Barnes entered her classroom, none of the students noticed.
The desk layout was in shambles. Some kids had taken marker to board, and drawn creatures only dreamed of by psychotic three -year-olds. Levitated elements and paper airplanes drifted across the room.
“I see you’ve all been busy,” Barnes said. This is going to be a long…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Marcel
“You’re welcome, Celarent.” Marcel winked, although his mouth stayed in a determined line. He pulled his hand back and continued onward.
They made it to class without any more fighting. The room was already full, and a little chaotic, so Marcel had to take a seat by nobody he knew.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Ahh, here we go. @loopylin @koshka @raxforge the Twins, Syph, Rax, and Ben are in the same class as I’m going to describe. (It’ll take a couple posts to see what I mean.)
Barnes
Barnes was only a few doors away from her class, when her way was aggressively blocked by another female teacher. Barnes stepped left and right, but was only faced wit…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
I’m scrolling to find the right tags but my wifi is fried 🫠
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Hmmm, Alaric. Or maybe Alistair.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
💚 I’d give him to you if I could. What should his name be?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
He’s my new friend.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
WHAT???
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