Audrey Caylin

@jane-maree Thanks, I just might do that! 🙂

@rochellaine

For some reason I was never notified about your post yesterday!

I’ll definitely put it on my list to listen to. It sounds like the kind of thing I’d like 🙂

That song does sound hilarious 😁

@Jenwriter17 I do songwriting too, so if you wanted any help with anything/another POV on lyrics, etc, feel free to drop me an email. *fingerguns*

@jenwriter17 You are very much welcome!

@daeus @jess-penrose thank youuuu! 😀 I’m keeping all your guys’ tips in mind

@kaya-young thanks! <3

@jenwriter17 Alrighty then. More on songwriting! (thanks @sam-kowal, yes I may be able to help.)

So, to be honest with you, the best way to write lyrics is to literally just write what is on your heart. Just write what you are thinking whether it is lament, praise, informing, or whatever you are feeling. See what sort of tune seems to flow from…[Read more]

@sam-kowal thanks so much! Yes, I’m working through watching those videos and trying to understand it all 🙂

@rochellaine Nope. the only time I’ve heard that word is in Newsies, but it is a fun word. Though I think it’s slightly too comical for the situation 😀

Actually, I like the term “swells”, it is a bit old-fashioned, but I think it works with the more slang way of speaking the lower class would have. It’s also the term Enjolras uses to describe…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool, okay. 😀

Well, point one, I’m trying to think of a term I could use instead of the word “Aristocrat”, something which conveys a similar meaning, and that the revolutionaries could use contemptuously.

Secondly, could I ask you some questions about my novel?

Hey, anyone around. I’m writing ;D @jess-penrose @jane-maree @anyone

@rochellaine I know it’s Sunday for you, but maybe you’re around for discussions?

@alia I guess coming up with a melody and lyrics really. I want to be able to put the song to music from my piano or guitar too.

@ariel-ashira I’ll probably post some songs when I come up with them 🙂

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@filewriterbase13x Yay! I’ll try to get to this Monday or Tuesday 🙂

@rochellaine

Second degree burns. Fun  😉

Do not apply lotions, ointment or fats to the burn for starters, just so we have that out of the way.

Do  not remove any clothing or jewellery stuck to the burn either.

Holding a burn under running water is the best way to treat it. If there isn’t any running water, pouring water over the wound will d…[Read more]

@Rochellaine

Okay, I can see that. We don’t have to argue about it 😛 You’re probably right, so I’ll have a look at it and work out how to change it. After all, it’s only one sentence, not a whole chapter thing 😀

@skredder

I’m going to post it once I’ve eaten lunch 🙂

I often work on short stories between working on novels, I find it lots of fun trying to condense a story into so few words (most of my short stories are under 2000 words)

They’re great for experimenting too!

@Rochellaine

Yep I got your comment. I’ll have to reread the section though. I…[Read more]

@skredder Oh, cool! I love writing short stories! Do you write many?

I’m wading through my novel, trying to get to the end of Part 2!

@skredder I’m on,  but I’m about to go for lunch. What project are you working on?