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Active 8 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice @alia @daughteroftheking Well I’m gonna have to leave. May your writing prosper! 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@jenwriter17 And I think my fingers are disproportionately small which doesn’t help 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic The Omniscient POV in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Dickens you say? Alrighty, I’ll take a look at more of his writing, thank you 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic The Omniscient POV in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Um…
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I don’t think I’v ever written a story using Omniscient PoV.
I don’t think I ever want to.
But the classics often use it, say Dickens. Maybe try studying the way he writes? That’s all I can really offer, I only do first person or limited third person, so its not really a topic in my field of experience.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@alia Helooooo! 😀
@seekjustice Oh I know! Some chords just seem nearly impossible to reach! Also, it’s painful to my precious writing fingertips 😉
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Jenna Terese started the topic The Omniscient POV in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
alrighty, y’all. here’s the dealio: I had this book idea that I wanted to be in omniscient POV. but the thing is, whenever I read a story with that POV, I hate it.
So, is there a way to do this POV where the reader won’t feel distant and will still love the characters?
@seekjustice @rochellaine @daughteroftheking @catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking so many times I try to explain writer things to non-writers, and they’re just like “um, what?” 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Ha, well, “playing” abd “serenading” are probably too strong words. I am teaching myself to play guitar but it mostly consists of me complaining that my fingers can’t do F chord.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking haha, yeah a non-writer would never believe that we have conversations with people we made up.
Now that I say that it sounds just the teensiest bit crazy 😛 😛 😛
I’m editing my sci-fi dystopian. Nearing the end!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Ooh guitar? I didn’t know you played guitar 🙂 yeah I’d love if you could stay and chat!
@daughteroftheking Hi! 😉 While Seekjustice is serenading us with guitar music, what are you working on?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
I’m not really on cause its Sunday afternoon for me, but I’m here to chat for a bit if you want to. I’m currently doing a bit of guitar.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic KP Book Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
I think they’re kind of a weird sci-fi fantasy cross so yeah, I think they count.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic KP Book Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@kaya-young I’ve never read those, so…?????
maybe someone else will know @seekjustice @catwng @dekreel
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic KP Book Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@kaya-young ooh awesome! yes, do let us know 😉 is it a fantasy?
I like your new profile pic 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic KP Book Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@princessfoo alrighty then, discuss away! 😉
I’m reading Bell Mountain, by Lee Duigon. here are some thoughts on it so far: the author uses omniscient POV, which I never liked. It feels a little distant. Also, I think the story could benefit from more description and worldbuilding.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice aw 🙁 I hope you’ll be feeling better soon. See ya tomorrow <3
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Joy posted an update 8 years, 3 months ago
One can forget a story, alter a story, or even throw away a story, but one can never completely abandon a story.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@ariel-ashira @Rochellaine @jenwriter17 @dekreel
I don’t think I’m going to be on today. I’m not well and I just think I need a break from the iinternet annd from writing. I’ll be back tommorrow or the day after 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic KP Book Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice @daughteroftheking @kaya-young @princessfoo @catwing @dekreel I was going to close the opening for voting on Monday, but how about we just close it now? We’ve got quite a few people now and everyone seems to have agreed on fantasy (and historical as our next one 🙂 ).
So how about we just begin discussing?
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