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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@warrenluther04 Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! It is part of a novel I’m working on called Clouded Fury. So, any questions that pop up from reading this short story will be answered there. However, I haven’t decided if I want this to be a scene in the actual story. If I don’t, I’ll still need a scene that achieves the same basic ending that…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I figured out what you meant by the point of view. I’ll see what I can do to fix it. Thanks. 🙂
I have the unfortunate habit of writing in third person omniscient and I don’t always take that into account.
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@gh24682468999 Okay, I made a few changes to the story. I added a little to the beginning and a little to the end. Hopefully, that will clear up a few things. I’m worried about adding any more in case it gets to spoilery for the full story. I had mentioned a little bit about her being on probation at the beginning, but it was a single…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong I am actually planning on making a whole series of holiday-themed KPAs. So if you aren’t in this one, then you will undoubtedly be in another one!
But you did originally sign up for it, if that’s what you mean! You were the first one, in fact…
The one I’m doing right now is Easter-themed
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Annnd, signing off. I need to get to bed *sigh*
858 words today! Whooop
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine *backs off* Ah, heheh… Yeah, silly thing really…
Yeah, sorry, I’ve never heard of him. *scratches head* But Jeff Spencer sounds a little familiar…
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine *wishes she recognized him* It looks like William Shatner, but then again all 1950s-60s actors look like William Shatner to me XD
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Joy replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl GAA! I missed your post about Dr Who! *shakes head at self*
Yesss, you’ve seen the First Dr! FYI, the next episode series after Unearthly Child, called The Daleks, was really good. And really long. It was the first appearance of the Daleks!
Yes, Five is my favorite. He’s cool! But I’d watch the Fourth first if I were you…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice @clairec @anyone
I’m still here XD
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Ohh, wow, I love Derek’s collage 😀
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@gabbyj What do you want to look like?
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Skredder replied to the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you for reading!
Unfortunately, this is not a stand-alone story. To add in all of the necessary background, it would have to be a whole lot longer. And to add it in would take away from the scene, I thought. A lot of your questions will be answered in the full story, in addition to more suspicious behavior on her part. You are…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @aislinn-mollisong @skredder @clairec @seekjustice @anyone
Sorry! Had to run and do a chemistry lab XPÂ But I’m back! Anyone still here?
Oh, and Rochellaine, congrats on becoming a Knight in Shining Armor! You earned it fast! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sierra-r Inadvertently (sort of) brought you in! Haha, thanks! Perhaps I should tag you more often
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Skredder started the topic Short Story for my Novel in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey Folks,
I’ve written a short story based on my novel Clouded Fury. It’s just to give me an idea about my MC and her interaction with another person and with her memories.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DtJUfCBJBk-beHpCIdVAMIw5sN3w4D-qNxRIFVfxw4o/edit?usp=sharing
Here’s the link if you’d like to read it. If you could tell me what you…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel Um…I guess you could say it’s medieval fantasy. The only thing fantasy about it is that the places I talk about aren’t real.
Pizza Ninja!!
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Joy replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 7 months ago
Ignore me, I’m conducting a test post
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@skredder KPA again. I’m getting to a part about Jane the Pizza Ninja. It’s not helping that I’m starving XD
What genre is Clouded Fury?
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Skredder replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel I’m working on my short story for Clouded Fury. It’s almost done! 😀
What about you?
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Eyy! What are you working on?
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