Artsy Dragon

also poor Erich and Esther! You really torture your charries lol

@freed_and_redeemed not me somehow forgetting Riker is German lollllll

how is that even possible to forget

@stephie lol

poor character

and that was probably not helpful at all, so.

@stephie

TBH, Whaley, Ellette and Koshka are all basically saying riffs on the same thing from what I can tell. It’s ok to have a girl fighting if she needs to (or if she thinks she needs to, which could be an important character arc), but don’t make her into what’s basically a guy with long hair and wide hips. (I mean, like the judge Deborah in…[Read more]

@stephie oooh I love the poems!

@whalekeeper

Oh very interesting! I really like it. It feels like the perspective of somebody who is forgetting their life but still loves the people around them through confusion.

@stephie yessss

@theducktator Executed for treason? Yikes. I’d hate to be the pecans.

@raxforge

“….the long lost cousin from Australia who was in jail for arson and wants to burn down the White House.”

Hey! That’s me!

oh so I guess you’re Sniper and Huntress’s child, then. (RAE’s told you about them right?)

@elishavet-pidyon ooooh I like…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle LOLLLLLLL

they would so do that though

@theshadow

Why not just let us live in communion with Him in ignorance? I’m probably 100% wrong about this, but I think living in ignorance would be better than many actively rejecting God and being separated from Him.

I’ll give my best classical response, then my personally preferred answer.

Essentially as you’ve already said, there is victory a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Also the part about the writer changing them didn’t make sense to me. Why not just not write…[Read more]

I’m kinda in between Whaley and Ellette on this. They both have good points I agree with.

It’s your call, Linus. Your story is the one on the line.

@whalekeeper I get that and to some extent agree. It’s just the inclusion of a detailed description of the spells kinda broke immersion for me a little. It didn’t seem THAT necessary.

@rae

Why did you two target me? Is there something you want? like, something specific for me to write about or were you like “I’m gonna hit RAE!”

Your tag is easy to remember

@the_lost-journal Yay! I’m glad you’re doing better. Also, sorry if I sounded too harsh

@ellette-giselle

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

I mean, I have a c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Hmm, this was interesting.

How do Alan’s friends feel about this?

Does he realize how guilty he’ll be when he wakes up? I mean, he just dedicated his life to God and swore off magic a few chapters ago.

I’m not sure how I feel about the spells being as descriptive as they are. I had no problem with it, personally, although it…[Read more]

Also, I get that you’re frustrated, but

And I don’t mean to be rude or random, but are you mentally ok? You are very weird.

I just wanted to know a simple question, and why would you even “fake” vote on my thing if you NEVER WANTED TO PARTICIPATE IN THE FIRST PLACE?!

AND FOR THE LAST TIME! I CANNOT DO THAT WHALEY!

Don’t talk to people like…[Read more]