Artistodysseyfan

@whalekeeper nope, I’m not a board games/roleplay games person. My friend and I did a warrior cats tabletop game once, but it didn’t last long. I only play roleplay games (mostly warrior cats or dragon-themed) on computer now.

@liberty lol

@liberty that must be weird.

imagine showing your dad that picture and saying “My online friend made a bad guy who has your name.”

Don’t do that lol

Wowwww that is a humungous post 👀

guys how do you spell humungous?????

@theducktator

Don’t worry, I added it!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much girl!!

@theshadow

Thank you! I really appreciate it!!

@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley

Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint I’m a girl and I agree with you on that lol

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

I’m sorry for replying to everyone and possibly being annoying, but you all are making sense of something I wasn’t able to make sense of myself…..

so yeah that’s a thing.