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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!
Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@rae wow…..
getting a little worked up there
However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
also, the dragon thing, InTeReStInG!!!!!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
in answer to your question, my story is currently soooo far from cannon that it is unlikely that any of the events of season 3.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@mineralizedwritings wow…..
Nice snippet!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
OUR brave sharpshooter boy lol.
Since you’re writing so much about him, he’s yours also.
ok off topic, but when you finish that picture of Markus, can you show me? He sounds like a really cool character, and I love his name!
As a dragon-person like the ones in my fanfics, he’d be awesome. Phee is a color changing, venom-spitter dragon…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Hans whyyyyyyy
so actually, thanks to Hans’ complicated backstory, and a few story clues from his canon universe, I’ve begun rethinking my fanfic villain, Hemlock.
He’s totally evil, through and through, and under practically no circumstances will I ever feel sorry for him, but I wonder how long, exactly, has he been the way…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas Yeah, it’s less about the time period and more how they’d recognize him. Snake has quite a lot of fame in the dragon world in the future–he’s effectively the Hercules or Achilles or any other mythical hero of the dragon world. Like, several characters of mine use “Snake’s teeth” as an expression.
So I would do it, except it’d be a little…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed My brother plays a WW2-themed Roblox shooter game which has the Battle of Castle Itter as a map in it, and I think he says he likes playing there. That’s how I know about it lol
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
You should!!! Also! Just started drawing Tech and Phee’s child, bc I refuse Techs death. His name is Markus and he is lookin’ fine.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins I haven’t yet, but I should soon!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@keilah-h
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @rae @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alright, gonna RP for two more charries real quick. Feel free to have your character interact with them or totally ignore them. 😛
Hallie
“Are you sure my hair looks okay?”
“Hallie, it looks fine.”
She turned away from the window and narrowed her eyes at her brother.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Everton
“Woah, what the— Oh…” Ev pushed a hand through his hair and looked at the boy he had run into. “Tony right?”
Sorry it’s so short. I wasn’t sure if Tony would just give a simple answer or not. 🙃
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, let’s do it! You can RP first though cuz I was just hopping on to answer your question. I don’t have time to RP atm. 😛
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