Artistodysseyfan

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!!!

The boys as, well… boys, lol, was so adorable to read!!

I love writing my charries as little kids!! 🥰

@thearcaneaxiom

I see what you mean. That’s a really good point.

For my situation specifically, I may have to change the chapter a bit. It is in my second draft and never existed in the first draft. In the first draft, they learn this information over time, but it’s unnatural. In the second draft, they learn a little bit at once, but it see…[Read more]

Oh,  I just saw you said they live in caves. Oops.

@loopylin @theloonyone Sorry this is late, but here you go.

Feather

Crosshair and Elissa were back. Good. Feather was about to run over to her husband and hug him, but she knew he’d hate her doing it in front of everyone else.

“What did you find?” Beth asked. “Does anyone here even have medical experience?”

Feather perked up a bit. “Some,” she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Sorry for replying late.

I love all those designs and names!

Oh, and for the Kobolds, I have a few ideas, but they all depend on where they live, and if they’re confirmed humanoid or can look like anything.

@joy-calle Sure thing!

@kathleenramm

I do actually have a question.

So, I understand that people can join the groups to become one of the people who critique others’ work, but how do you become the one who gets their work critiqued? Do you have to be published on KP to get critiqued?

@katthewriter

No, I was on my iPad.

Thanks for letting us know!

Totally! 🙂

@acancello

Awesome!! 😀

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Oooo I really like that scene! =D

Thank ya!!! 🥰

However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

You’re good!! 🙂

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

That sounds like a really good idea!! 😀

You’re welcome!! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient.

Alright! 👍

I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

Lol XD

Yeah. My siblings don’t like it when…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, yeah that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying! I would love to hear more, because you make it sound man made to a extent, but it’s also clearly a magical or beyond technological structure, so I want to understand the lore you got going now.

That’s a really good question… because I’m still figuring some things out. XD

I know wh…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

Great idea!!

I really need to worldbuild for Aletheia more. 🤦🏻‍♀️ This will help me finally get to the religions. I have a feeling they’ll be pretty close to real-world religions, since their world is very similar to ours, but I’m not sure yet. 🤔

@freedomwriter76

Have you RPed next for Will/the brothers, or did I miss it?

(I think my last RP is on pg. 348)

@princesachronicle22

Anwyn cringed, knowing that it was the sound of the strange foot coverings these savages chose to wear.

*gasp* Oh my word, is she talking about shoes?? That’s awesome!! XD I felt confused like she was at our human world, but in a good way. I could really see the world through her eyes, so great job!! 😄

As for the t…[Read more]

@acancello

I really like it!! I get a feel for the characters even more than the other way you had it. (For me, getting a feel for the characters is really important. 🙂 ) I loved the description!! 😄 Great job!!