Arien

@godlyfantasy12

Oh girl!!! YESS we so need to create that!!! Ahh it would be so fun

@freedomwriter76

And yesss I love your PFP too!!! It’s so pretty!

And girl, what happened with Riker and cats??? Like, what’s up with that? The poor baby!! Lol XD

@everyone

Great questions and answers!! Y’alls charries are so awesome and sweet <3<3!!

@freedomwriter76

Leo is afraid of spiders? Awww <3<3 I feel you bud! I’m not afraid of most spiders, but Black Widows…😳 *shudders* Anyway XD

@godlyfantasy12

Would you rather say everything on your mind? Or never speak again?

Matthew, glancing at Iris:…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

WOO-HOO!!! Go Min!!!! 35K words is AMAZING!!! You got this!!! 🥳🙌🏻🎉🎊

Thanks!! 💛

 

I’m doing better today. Stuff comes and goes still. Today we had clear blue skies and things are starting to warm up down here. 💜 I don’t like summer too much because it’s too hot and there’s a lot of bugs (and I hate bugs!!! 😱😱😱) but this winter…

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@freedomwriter76

I’m doing ok! Thanks so much for asking! 💛💛💛

I’ve been writing a bit, was editing my draft for Tauren and Lesli’s book, I’m at 35k words now!

I finished (and started lol) a 5 source annotated bibliography, so glad to have that over with lol. My topic is how dictators rise to power, so I’m learning some pretty interesting stuff…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

GIRL!! That was so good. So sad too! I kinda liked how you held off until the end to show he wasn’t drinking water, kinda gave the scene a bit more punch 😬 I feel so bad for both of them 😥 what a difficult thing to figure out, I think your doing a great job of it though!

@esther-c

Aww, you’re welcome!! <3<3

Oh yeah, we usually do that too on long car rides. But on short rides we just listen to K-Love a lot! But yeah, they do!! I love the Lauren Daigle songs and the Mercy Me songs.

@freedomwriter76

AHHH LEON!!!! ABELARD!!! NOOOOO!!!

Girl!!! You write the BEST SCENES!!! Ahh I want to cry and just hug both of them. And little Isabel!

😭😭😭😭😭😭

@esther-c

Ooh love it!!!! Ahh it’s so good <3<3

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I have!! I love it. I mean, it’s not as good as You Say or Rescue, but it’s probably my 3rd favorite of her songs. Do you listen to K-Love any? It’s such a great radio station!

@godlyfantasy12

Oof, sorry!! I went to bed really early last night, so I’m just now seeing this.

Asher

“Not at all,” Ara said. She looked around and asked, “Are you alone?”

I frowned slightly, biting my lip before speaking. “I…well…not exactly…my…my…” I trailed off.

My what? He’s…not that…no…he doesn’t think of me as that…

Ara no…[Read more]

Nice!!

Have you heard Lauren Daigles song “look up child”? It’s really good!! I can’t remember the lyrics distinctly, but she’s a Christian artist.

@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

@esther-c

Oh I read them! I’m interested to know where this is going!

Pls take the following with a very large grain of salt, it’s just thoughts and I have no idea where the series is going. You as the author knows best 😀 !!

It felt a little rushed how everything happened, but I mean it is only a first draft. In the scene with Ami and Ev…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

Dylan

The young man moaned, grimacing.

I frowned and touched his shoulder again. “Hey…”

He jerked slightly at my touch, then tried to push himself up from the floor. He lost any strength that he had and, before I could catch him, face-planted back into the floor .

Oh wow…that’s gotta…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah yeah maybe!!

@esther-c

Ooh interesting!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the link of the video!! I’ll check it out 🙂

@esther-c

Ikr? Lol

Villains are hard. Because it’s difficult to create their motive and personality without making it cliche.

Yesss!!! It so is. I’ve been reading a lot of articles about writing one tho, so hopefully I’m improving. 🙂

@GODLYFANTASY12

OMG!!!! YESSS!!!! Ahhh that would be PURE GOLD!!!!

And seriously, I just went to my first ever dance last night!! It was so fun!!

Lol a boy that I danced with really reminded me of how Matthew would be at a dance XDXD. He stood in the corner for a while and looked super awkward and out of place, poor thing. If we do that,…[Read more]

@esther-c

oh good question!

if it’s a large transition in location, I would put it in between chapters. then you dont have to say, “they arrived at the park” you would just start off the chapter with “Ami looked around at the park (describe lighting/colors)”

I recently realized how important lighting is in descriptions. I think I realized this…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @esther-c @freedomwriter

anyone here to chat while i wait for my nails to dry? Goodness this is boring. XD

@keilah-h

Thanks! I guess i’m just picky lol

@godlyfantasy12

lol that would be fun!!