@ariella-newheart
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:
“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀
The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@alia I like Jycin just from your descriptions. Can you tell me a bit about him, or are there spoilers?
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Every time you people hijack a thread, I freak out because on the Aetherlght forums, off-topic posts are either moved to Random Anything or deleted. Spamming is a federal offense.
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic A Girl Writing from a Guy's POV in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Thank you. I knew a bit of that, but I wasn’t sure. As some of you people know, I didn’t do the best job on Nikko….so I was a bit wary.
@jenwriter17 Thank you!
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Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@kaya-young Jenna would live in a log cabin, hands down.
@that_writer_girl_99 Ohh… Ummmmmm… probably shapeshift
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ingridrd We seemed to have hijacked your thread… XD
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@catwing Chairs are for melting! Not scratching! *tosses chair to @dragon-snapper* *continues scratching walls*
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths I didn’t think you were related to Catwing, I thought Catwing was related to Leumeister. I’m pretty sure he even said so himself!!
So he’s your brother??
I… am… so confused. *scratches wall*
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths @catwing WHAT?!! I thought Leumeister said– 0.0
@leumeister One more time: Are you Catwing’s brother?? Or Louise’s? Or neither?
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Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Would your character rather only eat chocolate for the rest of their life (deliciousness), or only eat carrots for the rest of their life (healthiness)?
Jenna would rather eat chocolate.
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Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths Jenna would rather call the brute squad and arrange her wedding
@rochellaine Oh, burst out laughing in the middle of a meeting, for sure!
@skredder Depends on her mood, but typically she’d rather sit inside
@jenwriter17 X’D X’D X’D Umm… Jenna loves animals, so she would rather not fight them at all, but if she had to choo…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Dug from Up…he’s the bouncy dog, right? I guess you could make me like him, too…both he and Toothless work. Both of them are like my dog, and in turn like me!
Star Wars and Harry Potter, a bit of Marvel and DC as well. 🙂 I can’t think of anything else off of the top of my head….
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jessi-rae Hah, yep. My characters are like that, too. As far as I’m concerned, they’re solving a riddle. And they are eventually going to end up in a chasm. But between point A and point B… nothing.
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Joy replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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I see red. Literally. Who did this to me? my mind starts whirling but then my head begins to buzz and I no longer need the blindfold to cover my eyes, for I can’t even see with them open. The last thing I remember is Akira’s startled shout.
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Pain. It’s all that is real in this world of misery. Sometimes I feel gentle hands bathing m…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @sam-kowal @dekreel
Ohh, this is getting intense! I’m not going to copy and paste the first part of the story for the next portion, if that’s okay. It’ll just get too long. 🙂
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Pain. It’s all that is real in this world of misery. Sometimes I feel gentle hands bathing my wounds, but then the pain comes agai…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@jessi-rae Ugh, yeah my characters are like that, too. I’m not sure if they even have a personality. *bangs head on table*
X’D X’D Wow, that is funny! And true!!
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@warrenluther04 Actually you remind me more of Dug from Up. I guess that makes sense XD
What things do you geek over? I know you love Star Wars and… maybe Harry Potter. Anything else?
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Okay. That makes sense!
Thanks. I was trying to think up the best way to describe my personality, and here’s what I came up with. I am optimistic, extroverted, and geek (nerdy, same thing). 😀 Basically, I’m Toothless as a golden retriever! *wags tail* 🙂
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