Ariel Ashira

@aviantrail My Marvel knowledge is limited to movies too, though I wonder what the comics are like. Yes, Avengers are aaaaawesome! that’s cool that you got to have Cap’s personality!

@ingridrd How’s it going? I wrote about 300 words which ended up a little bit like what I had originally written, but now I’ve switched to editing another short story.  (I get distracted easily.)

@aviantrail Well, that’s an excellent start at least. Hopefully you’ll learn to like him in the next movie.

@sam-kowal Thanks!  As you probably know by now, I took a look at the doc.  It actually helped a lot as an explanation of what I need to fix.

I definitely can’t use your examples – because his voice totally changes in them from my version of his voice. 🙂  But I consider that a good thing because otherwise I’d feel like you had written it in…[Read more]

@kaya-young 😀 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

(@seekjustice *Unnaturally wide grin* *unnaturally narrowed eyes* *HAHAHAHAHA*)

(@kaya-young we sorta have a thing where we all want to be the first to say that to newcomers to KP, but I’ve not done it yet.)

:/ Nope, I have never heard of Jeff Wheeler, sadly. I must go look him…[Read more]

@aviantrail 😀 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

I like Star Wars, too. 😀 Also, I read several Warrior books a while back. I liked them, and I always thought it was funny how there was this epic fantasy cat world basically on the side of a country road and in someone’s back woods (the Thunderpath, right?)

What is your main book…[Read more]

@rochellaine Here |https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ko4Su754S_pyYGy-mSM_wQy2viP_i5iA3reQCtjwi7A/edit | is a kind of sliced up version where I made the paragraphs and thoughts less rambling, to show you what I meant. Also, one thing you could do is add more descriptions and senses; like how when he falls in the water, does it bite his skin with…[Read more]

@rochellaine  OH NO!!!  That is awful.  Losing something you’ve written is horrible.  Hopefully you can remember most of it!

@ingridrd Last night I lost about 500 words of a short story when my computer failed. 🙁  For some reason it didn’t even autosave.  So now I’m trying to remember what I had written and re-write it.

@rochellaine  I am mostly brainstorming for my WIP (which I just finished the first draft of)…just trying to figure some plot holes out and such.  🙂

@ingridrd Hello yourself.  What type of world-building?

@rochellaine  Hello, hello. 😉

@ingridrd Okay, I’m here.  Maybe now I’ll have the courage to rewrite those 500 words I lost last night.

@bella-d I think the first way people learn to make relationships is when someone else forces them out of their shell into a relationship.  I know this may seem cliche, but I think the reason it works so well in fiction is because it is like that in real life.  I have seen traumatized and withdrawn people who opened up after a lot of patience a…[Read more]

I am doing some characterization and world-building…

@seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @dragon-snapper

@bella-d I could answer this, but I’m most interested in what @kate-flournoy would say since I know she’s faced something similar and overcame it.

@rochellaine  Ooooh!  My favorites are Unter, Byrk, and Anret.  🙂

@aviantrail Welcome! I LOOOOOVE Stars Wars and Marvel too? Tell me you’ve seen The Last Jedi!!!!!!!!! Do you have a favorite superhero? I really like Captain America and Hawkeye.

@kaya-young WEEEEELLLLCOOOME!!!!

Ah, a fellow Christian homeschooler! I like to sing too (when I’m alone, that is) and I absolutely love anything DIY! I like to listen to music too; Audiomachine, the Piano Guys, Ludovico Einaudi, Helen Jane Long, bluegrass, I Am They. What music do you like to listen to?

I have pets too!!! 😍Two adorable guinea…[Read more]