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@rochellaine HAHA! Ehem, Yeah I agree. I don’t find him to be very attractive. Though my mother would give me an interesting look if I said that in her presence. 😉

@joisebeth
Cool! Ive heard alot about K.M Weiland. Her instructional books are amazing! (My sister @introvert_girl loves them a lot) Though I don’t have a clue what her actual fiction books are about haha. Do you have a favorite by her? 😀

And ah yes, my username. The simple answer is its true! *kapeefers gasp* I’m not a writer 😉 (I think t…[Read more]

@rochellaine  I haven’t watched TNG yet. I might watch it tonight if I’m not busy 😀

@daughteroftheking  Which is your favorite series? Mine is TOS. Favorite character? Mine is Spock 😎 *wishes there was an emoji for the Vulcan salute*

@warrenluther04 Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! It is part of a novel I’m working on called Clouded Fury. So, any questions that pop up from reading this short story will be answered there. However, I haven’t decided if I want this to be a scene in the actual story. If I don’t, I’ll still need a scene that achieves the same basic ending that…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking *welcomes you because I could talk about Star Trek all day* Actually, my brother’s the Trekker in the family, but because he likes it so much I’ve been exposed to it and like it too.  My favorite series is Voyager, but my favorite character is Worf from TNG, so yes, I like it.  Captain Picard is really cool, and he’s Brit…[Read more]

@notawriter Actually, you’re right.  Chara’s hair is straighter.  As I told @kaya-young, that’s kind of what she looks like when she’s dressed up. 🙂 (She actually looks kind of like me, and if you look at my hair in my profile pic you’ll see it’s straight, but I can tell you that it’s really easy to curl, and I can get my hair to look similar t…[Read more]

@skredder I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you sooner.  I’m glad you figured out what I meant.

I had that same problem recently… 😀  I’ve found that line breakers really help when I want to suddenly change thoughts.

The added section at the ending is perfect!  It makes a lot more sense now.

@gh24682468999 Hey! Another person (besides me) who has read Ranger’s Apprentice!!!!!! (Sorry, it’s a really good series in my opinion.)

Oh…um…sorry, that was totally off-topic for this forum.

@skredder I like it! So is this a part of a story, or a stand alone one?

@rochellaine Hmm I actually pictured Chara with straight hair, though the color is pretty close 😀 I also pictured her looking a tad younger?(Actually maybe the makeup is whats throwing me off) *shrug*
Wow Uncle Bill looks nothing how I pictured him but I like him here a lot better haha.
These are cool! They make me wanna read the book! 😀

@rochellaine I figured out what you meant by the point of view. I’ll see what I can do to fix it. Thanks. 🙂

I have the unfortunate habit of writing in third person omniscient and I don’t always take that into account.

@gh24682468999 Okay, I made a few changes to the story. I added a little to the beginning and a little to the end. Hopefully, that will clear up a few things. I’m worried about adding any more in case it gets to spoilery for the full story. I had mentioned a little bit about her being on probation at the beginning, but it was a single…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong  I am actually planning on making a whole series of holiday-themed KPAs. So if you aren’t in this one, then you will undoubtedly be in another one!

But you did originally sign up for it, if that’s what you mean! You were the first one, in fact…

The one I’m doing right now is Easter-themed

@rochellaine  I picture her with black hair, light eyes and very petite features. I’m not sure if You actually wrote her that way or I’m just making stuff up in my head… 😉

@clairec Yes, that’s the one I was talking about.  At the beginning and at the end they show that Steve crashed in the Arctic and was frozen for 70 years, effectively time-traveling to the present day, because he did not grow older those seventy years in between, and remembered nothing of it.

@aislinn-mollisong That was a really long list – and I have many more recommendations I could give you!  But please let me know if you like any of these, as I’d love to hear that someone else enjoys the same books I do – since most people have never heard of most of those books. 😀

@aislinn-mollisong Okayyy, but isn’t The Enchanted Barn “just living”?

So, here we go:

Western: William MacLeod Raine, B. M. Bower, and Zane Grey are my favorite authors in this category.

Romance: G.L. Hill, you know…Definitely read Marcia Schuyler and The Strange Proposal.  Rosa Nouchette Carey wrote some pretty deep romances, but they get v…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, Well, Jared is Edd “Kookie” Byrnes, who is a pretty well-known icon of 1950s “beatnik” culture, so it’s possible you’ve seen his picture somewhere.  He’s from 77 Sunset Strip, like Derek (Roger Smith).

@josiebeth I love K. M. Weiland too! I’ve read her Outlining Your Novel, Structuring Your Novel, and Creating Character Arcs (and I use the workbooks). I haven’t actually read any of her fiction yet though.

If you like to read fantasy, Chuck Black and Robert Treskillard has some really good ones!

I always thought ukulele looked like a lot of…[Read more]

@kaya-young thanks! I really like short names and Rin seemed to fit her personality really well

@rochellaine nice collages! I tried really hard to recognize some of the faces. but, alas, I don’t think I know them. I almost thought Jared looked familiar…..

@dekreel, well the episodes are on dailymotion.com, if you’re interested.  It’s a detective show, so there’s action and spy stuff, and there are funny parts, too.  I know you don’t like one-episode romances, and there’s some of that, but I know there are some episodes without it.  Kind of like Star Trek, you know?

Speaking of Star Trek, have…[Read more]