Ariel Ashira

@rochellaine

Yes, love at first sight annoys me so much! In Thor’s case, it definitely is about looks, since he has zero personality to speak of.

Could be, I’m not sure. *lowers voice to a whisper* I hardly ever watch movies. I’m majorly unschooled when it comes to movies, especially old ones, so….

@seekjustice I don’t really watch comics, but I read the plots of a lot online just so I’ll know what people are talking about. 😀 So I have heard of that part of Thor.  I don’t really like “love at first sight,” though.  I think it happens sometimes, but for the most part it feels like they’re all about looks instead of personality.

I think it…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I think the first one is pretty cute…kind of disturbing though. Have you seen the movie Thor? That’s exactly what happens, except the girl runs into Thor and then it’s basically love at first sight.

@seekjustice *takes moral support* *examines it* *decides it might possibly help*

Thanks. 😀

I have a random question with relation to one of my stories:

Which “meet cute” is better?

#1 She is upset, so she crosses the street without looking, and he hits her with his car.  She isn’t really hurt, but he has to help her get home and make sure…[Read more]

@rochellaine

oh, that sounds…fun. Good luck. I give you my moral support.

@seekjustice I am trying to figure out how creating a website works. 😀  I’ve updated my parents’ ministry website several times, but my brother created it in the first place, so I already have everything I need to work with there.  Now I’m trying to make a website for myself and…not going quite as smoothly as planned. 🙁

@rochellaine

Cool, I’m doing some editing. What are you up to?

@warrenluther04 ooh, publishing the story?! *makes mental note to finish reading it in time* where are you publishing it (on KP I’m guessing)? that is so cool!!! 😀 congrats and confetti and cake and all other good things to you 😉

@seekjustice I’ll be here for a very short while.

@ariella-newheart Veggie Tales rocks 😉

glad you’re enjoying this reading <3

yes, he must have been pretty excited about his new queen

@lady-iliara  My pleasure!! *waves* *walks off* *barely dodges rock*

@0-0enyali0-0  😀 No, I have not read it, yet. Should I? 😉

Yeah, I have several ideas. But I haven’t started writing them. Not until I actually join (maybe this weekend!!! *pulls another Vytanni*).

Yes, I do get that reference. Comes with being friends with Aislinn and A…[Read more]

I’m signing out. Farewell cruel world of writing that only allows 3 sentences to appear…

Here are a few prompts I’ve just come up with, and a few that I found in an old file. 🙂

If the ship had crashed, all would have been lost.  If the ship had crashed, all her plans would have crashed with it.  If the ship had crashed, she would have drowned and she would have never seen Marloth again.
Oh, how she wished the ship had crashed!

“I d…[Read more]

@rochellaine, all but the youngest. My older three sisters have been writing for forever, in fact @charisetter recently published her book. and then the sister right after me is starting on her writing path.

Farewell, I hope so too.

@alia ALL your siblings write?  I don’t know if that’s cool or scary. 😀

I think I’m going to disappear now…

Goodbye, and hope you find your solution!

@rochellaine, thanks, I’ll try that. I’m sure since they all write there must be something I can use…right @charisetter?

@alia Oh, I’m sorry. 🙁  Do you have any siblings?  Why don’t you tell them what your MC has to do, and ask them how they would go about it?  Of course, what they say probably won’t work, but it might give you an idea.

@rochellaine, I tried that with my dystopian novel and ended up even more confused…

@alia Oh, and I kind of feel like adding that signature someone (I don’t remember who) has which says something like “Feel free to disregard any and all writing advice.  It’s mostly just my opinion anyway.” 😀 😀

@alia Usually when I get to a part in my story like that I skip ahead to the part where I know what’s going to happen, just putting a couple of bold lines of text where I skipped, such as

“(Now Jack falls down the cliff)”

And then write about how they try to rescue him.  Usually by the time I write a little farther ahead I get an idea of what…[Read more]