Ariel Ashira

@alia mm, that seems to be a pretty hard subject.

@jenwriter17

I feel like a successful author when people say they put off their to-do list to read my book. I mean, I’d feel like a failure if you told me you’d left half way through to sweep the kitchen or something 😛

And being a successful author and all, it is my duty to supply you with as many cliffhangers as I can muster.

Chessy and…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, whether or not God knows the future and if He does then do we have free will

@alia yeah, sure 😉 what are you debating about, if you don’t mind me asking?

@seekjustice *fangirls again*

I’ll be back in about half an hour…

@seekjustice…where can I find it???

@alia

No, not an officially published one. I do have one that a few of the other KeePers have read and like to fangirl over 😀 It’s called Stars Fill Infinity and I just started the sequel, which is why everyone is excited 🙂

@seekjustice, wait, have you published a book?

@leumeister 😀 Would you send me the links? I think it would be awesome to see what you have come up with. What programs do you use to create your electronic sounds? Do you use Ableton? I’ve been thinking about getting into that, but so far I don’t know much about making electronic music

@jenwriter17, I’m debating someone, does that count?

@jenwriter17 Shall I cause a great horror to come upon you by saying I didn’t ship Chessy and Justice really at all during the reading of Stars Fill Infinity? 😉  I actually told @seekjustice I didn’t think that they should end up as a couple.

*backs away warily*

@rochellaine @seekjustice @skredder @kaya-young Anyone wanna write with me?

@mnvalentine Shorter would probably help. I don’t think you necessarily need more conflict as much as you should capitalize on the conflict you’ve got. Humor would also help move the story on a bit faster. 🙂

@seekjustice I finished it! (I pushed off my to do list to finish it because I couldn’t stop 😉 )

I love this so much already! It feels so good to read about these characters again, and I love how Chessy and Justice’s relationship has gotten.

But, uh…………

CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRR!

I am so looking forward to the next part!!! 😀

@skredder ooh, now you’re getting me excited! 😀

@rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀

bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!

😛

I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉

@jenwriter17 I’m really excited for when you get to parts 4 and 5. I’m going to put up 3 tomorrow and I’ll put up 4 and 5 on Wednesday because I may be gone later this week. Also, 4 and 5 should be read as close together as possible. But, yeah, I can’t wait until you get there! 😀

@jenwriter17 @sleepwalkingmk  Is not @seekjustice heartless?  She has no words of sympathy or comfort for her weeping reader, but simply tells me I “should have learnt by now!”

(See above for explanation.)

Seekjustice: Okay, see you tonight!  (If I’m not still heartbroken by then.)

@rochellaine

well, I would have thought you would have learnt by now 😀

I have to go, but I’ll be on later 😀

@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂

My answers to your questions:

1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.

2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.

3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂

4) Yup! 😀

@seekjustice You awful person, you!  How could you not warn me, after I told you I had a rough day with ATOTC?!  I had only gotten a few paragraphs into Justice’s POV when I started crying again! 🙁  Oh, Sapphire!  Oh, Kendall!  Oh, Waif!  Oh, everyone!

😀 😀 It was great, as always!  I can’t wait to read the next part.