Ariel Ashira

@jenwriter17 Alright! Just requested access! I can’t wait to read it! 😀

@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0

@catwing

Ah, I’m terrible at show don’t tell! And passive voice…urgh!

I have to delete a few characters from my WIP since there’s so many and quite a few are redundant. still, they’re my babies and I love them. I’m sad to see them go 🙁

@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
(It will only be Alex, Jack, and Cele. Mostly…)

@catwing Cool! How’s it going?

@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀

@alia Goodnight (feel better tomorrow!)

@catwing What are you editing?

@alia Yikes… Hope you feel better soon.
Good night then.

@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed

@seekjustice Welcome.

@alia @catwing

I’m here and I’m sorta editing.

@ingridrd what is her power? I really like it.
@daughteroftheking oooooh… I like it.

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…)

@jenwriter17 Kay would jump into Niagara Falls. Not much air up there where the plane is flying.
Alex says the same.
what about your characters?

@rochellaine, maybe. I’m going to submit it to the Story Embers contest, so I don’t know yet

@seekjustice,

I’m back

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit

@rochellaine

Okay, see you later 🙂

@seekjustice Haha!  I guess you do, don’t you! 😀

I’m going to go now.  I’ll probably be back tonight around the usual time.  Hope to see you then!

@rochellaine

I mean, just in one series I have Justice, Joshua, Jean, Jonas, Joseph, and Quillon’s middle name is James.

I read over the second last chapter and made some plans. Yesterday I changed the epilogue for the third time.

@seekjustice I love J names too, but I guess for now I’ll go with Marc.

Did you decide to actually edit Stars?  How’s it going?