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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Yes, I read it!! Its really good. I hope you will finish writing it when you are done with your western! My MC girl in The Crimson Cup – her name is Atarah!!! Only she’s fifteen. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Yes, I read your comments to eachother. I read all the stuff on this topic.
Who is Bobert? I have heard of him before, but I don’t know who he is really.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine PLEASE CAN I READ IT??!!! Oh, man, I would love to!!!
Oh, I didn’t think about age! Yeah, that would be pretty funny actually. And difficult to explain that he could still be young and good looking when he was 98! But,really, you should go for it. After your western, course of.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Ack! I have to go for now. 🙁 Hope I can be back sometime before tomorrow. See ya then!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Wow!!! Judas’ daughter? Wow! Can you hurry up and write it so I can read it?!! That sounds amazing!
Yes, I have heard of Twice Freed, but I have decided not to read it until I have finished working out the plot for my own story I am writing about Onesimus. Its hard though, because my friends keep telling me about it! :P…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Did you just become an Eccentric Mentor? Congratulations!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Goodness! You would think the ram would get the idea!
Ooooh!!! Your stories sound so awesome! How creative.
Does your NT story have Onesimus in it?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 😀 Its one of my favorite scenes.
@rochellaine When were your biblical stories set?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine My sister spent a couple weeks with some friends while they were lambing this year, and she loves sheep. Then again, she loves alnost any animal, even rats and hairless dogs. :P. I don’t know if I like sheep or not. We have never had tham. I think they can be cute, though.
Yeah, I have seven stories set in ancient times. T…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Here you are…
There was a scramble to be out of the road. Some of the women left thier water jars by the well as they fled, but Jerusha managed to keep hers as she dashed out of the way. Then she stood and waited as the hard faces and gleaming armor of the legionaries passed, thier sandals sending up clouds of du…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine An indoor goat? Awww… Ours had babies several times. They were smaller than our cats when they were born, and so cute! And ours were pets, although they cleared a lot of brush and poison ivy for us.
*tries hard to think of another snippet I can remember*
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Nice! What is the name of this story?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I love goats too! Do have any? We had some little pygmy goats for a while, and nubians back when I was like five.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Actually, Joshua saves the goat although he really gets beat up in the process. He knows how much the goat means to the blind boy, because it helps him go places like a seeing eye dog.
This story is set in A.D. 31-33 and has the death, resurrection, and accession of Jesus in it. Is that what you mean?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Oh good! And I like B-bot. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…
Joshua’s fists clenched. The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet. His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd. The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Nice! Does Chara go to the hospital???
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys! I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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