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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@kina-lamb *happily accepts*
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to be outlining/writing for a while. 🙂
@kina-lamb, @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @cloudy @graciegirl @ethryndal @anyone -
Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
I’m going to be outlining/writing for a while. 🙂
@kina-lamb, @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @cloudy @graciegirl @ethrydal @anyone -
Kina Lamb replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@feedingmygoldfish welcome! Did you draw your profile picture? I really like it. 😀 Have you read “Anne Of Green Gables?” You seem like someone who would enjoy her. 😀
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Jess replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@feedingmygoldfish
Yes, that little bit about the water flinging was pure comedic gold. And so stinking true, too. Everyone’s already asked you a lot of questions, so I won’t add anymore to your plate. Hope to see you around the forum !!! 😀 *disappears dramatically with a snap of her fingers* -
Jess replied to the topic Phoenix Tears – Please Critique. in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
I’m not that great at poetry, but right here:
His soul must waver and burn no more,
And then, I will finally settle the score.
He’s robbed me of my love,
He now shall burn and the likes thereof.
They shall burn.You suddenly insert an “I” and it gets a little confusing as to who is narrating? Phoenix? The author? A narrator? So either c…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
*pats you on back and flings glitter everywhere* Congratulations!
1. How many of you write extended outlines? Or do you simply start with a basic outline, or just dive in at the first draft?
I don’t write extended outlines, just because I lose interest in the story. I do try to write a basic outline with a rough estimate of how many words will…[Read more] -
Kina Lamb replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose you’ll probably be done by the time I can write, but once I finish baking bread this afternoon, (I have to start by 2:00 p.m.) since the weather is spectacular, I’ll be in my favorite spot mapping out my children’s story. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Today I reviewed Matthew 6:1-4. It’s funny how when I first memorized that small passage, it took me about half an hour but now it would take me about 10 minutes. Memorizing just gets easier and easier guys!
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Kina Lamb and FeedingMyGoldfish are now friends 7 years, 7 months ago
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Kina Lamb and Cloudy are now friends 7 years, 7 months ago
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
ah, @dragon-snapper, I just had an idea. Daeus loves to sing, he’s always singing, and he sings really well. He loves symphonies, too. Oh, he loves symphonies! (Did I mention he wants to write one of his own?) If you could capture his love of music in your story, it would be really accurate. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper I absolutely cannot believe that I didn’t see this earlier!!! Wow, this is great! Although…. I do have to say that Daeus isn’t like how you pictured him. He really is very kind and not at all controlling or desiring of power… 😀 But I do have to say, the part when “As they marched into the armory, Daeus conldn’t help but say,…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus give credit where credit is due. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus that was my idea!
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Jess replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper You should have someone who disappears in a cloud of glitter/pickles/or flames. I vote for a sequel too.
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Audrey-caylin I kinda disappeared for a while, so I figured you just didn’t see me 😉
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper @jane-maree @audrey-caylin
I’m signing off. I can’t think anymore, I keep getting distracted. Oh look, a shiny object! Anyways, I got 1000 words. -
Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-snapper *applauds*
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper Return to us quickly, after you vanquish your foe! 😛 (That is, if you’re not already back)
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